[SUB] Attack from the Children of the Sea

[Shinku]

Thread Title/Link: Attack from the Children of the Sea
Location/Mission Number: Notice Island - North Blue
Total Post/Word Count: 90
Brief Synopsis:
When the Stone Scale pirates, a group of five very vicious fishmen arrive at Notice Island, a skilled craftsman who had been driven away from his home on Fishman Island, is painfully reminded of his past. Orous does know the pirates as they have been tormenting him even since he was a kid. Now they do not only enslave a lot of the people in his new home, but they're also killing them merciless and cause havoc in their search of a treasure that's supposed to be hidden somewhere on the island.
With the help of a stranger who had just arrived on the Island by chance, he organizes the townspeople into a working defence force and together they fight to defeat the intruders.

mildofthewild
Character Name/Link: Orous
Individual Post Count: 45
X-Poinz at Submission: 330
Notable Feats:
- Organized the townspeople into a strong defence
- Defeated the pirates and saved the town
- Managed to gain recognition from the town's people
- Overcame his fears as he faced his past and decided to move forward
- Made a friend

Shinku
Character Name/Link: Rince
Individual Post Count: 45
X-Poinz at Submission: 300
Notable Feats:
- Came up with a strategy that was later employed to fight against the pirates
- Did not run away!
- Defeated one of the pirates with help from his acquaintaince
- Grew mentally stronger through his interactions with Orous and is now ready to face his past
- Made a friend

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Orous mildofthewild
330 (Starting XPz) + 45 (# of Posts) * 10 (XPz per Post) * 1.15 (Bonus) =
330 (Starting XPz) + 518 Earned XPz = 848 Total XPz

Rince Levi Shinku
300 (Starting XPz) + 45 (# of Posts) * 10 (XPz per Post) * 1.15 (Bonus) =
300 (Starting XPz) + 518 Earned XPz = 818 Total XPz

Note: For Mild, just a small thing, but its generally a good practice to stick to one tense for a scene / paragraph. It didn't happen very often but I did notice a few times you swapped between past-present a bit. It can be a little jarring to read. Something to consider. Otherwise good job both of you.

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