Gen's Tiki Bar and Dojo

[Fennec]

Character’s Name:– Gen Momochi
Profile:– Link
Devil Fruit:– N/A
Current X-Poinz:– 798

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Remove Old Negative Trait

Sun Scorned
[Starter Trait]
The sun is your enemy! It absolutely scorns you and as such your skin easily burns and becomes irritated upon contact. While uncomfortable it's not inherently lethal to you. This also makes your skin constantly be red and hot to the touch.

New Trait

Sun Scorcher
[600 xpz]
The sun is still your enemy! It absolutely scorns you and as such your skin easily burns and becomes irritated upon contact. While uncomfortable it's not inherently lethal to you. However, you have managed to make the most out of your weakness and can now store heat in your skin making it hot to the touch and keeping you warm in cold weather.

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Improving Fighting Style

Name:– Coiling Dragon (コイリング リュウ - Koiringu Ryu)
Focus:– Swordsmanship, Power, Speed, Spinning
Class:– E --> D (200 xpz)(125 xpz rebait)
Description:– A quick and powerful sword fighting style with a heavy emphasis on delivering rapid and powerful blows capable of ending fights quickly. Another interesting quirk of the fighting style is that a lot of its techniques involve spinning motions.


Aspect Unlocked:
Tempered Steel
With enough concentration and appreciation of the motion of all things. Gen has mastered the ability to cut through steel with his sword. (Coiling Dragon)

Overheat
By using the heat stored in his skin from sunburns. Gen is able to generate enough heat to produce reddish-orange flames! (Drunk Man's Fist)

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Techs

Name:– Ryuugame: Kiru (Dragon Turtle: Cut)
Fighting Style:– Coiling Dragon
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen prepares a power attack and places the sheathed sword upright (while holding it in a reverse grib.) He then senses the "motion" of his opponent, the Tengu then rapidly unsheathes, attacks, and resheathes their sword. Releasing a devastating blow capable of cutting through steel with ease.
Cost:-- 125 xpz (rebait)

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Techs

Name:– Drunk Man's Fist
Focus:– Dirty Tricks, Improvising, Martial Arts, Alcoholism
Class:– E --> D (200 xpz) (125 rebait xpz)
Description:– A style of fighting that involves an intoxicated state as well as the imitation of an intoxicated state. This fighting style also involves improvision, cunning, and some semblance of martial arts.

Name:– Stumble to Heaven
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen has device a technique that allows him to stumble his way into the heavens! After running away from Miu he figured he needed another means of escape besides running. As such he began to practice running while stumbling and eventually he began to walk on air. As his running became powerful kicks that allowed him to remain aloft as long as stamina allowed. He figured he was able to do this by releasing stress in his body which was done via stumbling like a drunkard. Through the stress relief he was able to in essence 'loosen' his weight and walk on air. 
Cost:-- 125 xpz (Rebait)

Name:– Wings of Tempest
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen spins with his arms sticking out to create a dragon-like tornado that both strikes and blows away enemies.
Cost:-- 125 xpz

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Costs and Totals

Trait: Free
Aspect/Upgrade:
Tempered Steel -- [200 xpz]
Overheat -- [200 xpz]
Techniques: Wings of Tempest: -- 125 xpz
Total X-Poinz used: -- 525 xpz
Total X-Poinz left: -- 48

[Vio]

<sup>Hi, Sam!

First thing’s first, your app’s a bit all over the place, but here’s the main things I need you to tackle for me. The Technique Ryuugame: Kiru is listed down as a Rank 1 — it should be a Rank 2 — but is otherwise fine.

The one thing I’m a little iffy on, but it’s not a major issue, is that you’re applying for an Aspect for Drunk Man’s Fist and not taking any Techniques that even use it? If you could clarify that that is your intention for now, then that’s fine. Aspects cannot really be used without Techniques appropriate to them?</sup>

[Fennec]

Fixed the rank!
And yea! I am aware and that is an intentional choice of mine. It's a bit of an xpz management thing. I wanted the aspect but I couldn't immediately afford anything that I wanted without giving up something else. But yea I am aware I can't use the aspect without a technique!

[Vio]

<sup>Alright, then! Good to go!

Please update Gen’s profile!</sup>

[Fennec]

Character’s Name: Gen Momochi
Profile: link
Devil Fruit: N/A
Current X-Poinz: 1,656 xpz

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TRAITS

Inhuman Toughness
Travel through the Grand Line has hardened Gen's spirit and resolve. Thanks to his many battles and hardships his body is now more resistant to incoming attacks and as such he doesn't succumb to them as easy as before. This by no means make the Tengu indestructible. (1,650 xpz Benchmark)

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RENAMING

Former Name:
• Overheat
By using the heat stored in his skin Gen can call upon flames! (Drunk Man's Fist)

New Name:

• Tengubi || 天狗火 ["Tengu Fire" in Japanese]
Gen is able to call upon flames using the heat stored in his skin! (Drunk Man's Fist)

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Former Name:

Tempered Steel
With enough concentration and appreciation of the motion of all things. Gen has mastered the ability to cut through steel with his sword. (Coiling Dragon)

New Name:

• Yakimodoshi-kō || 焼戻し鋼 ["Tempered Steel" in Japanese]
With enough concentration and appreciation of the motion of all things. Gen has mastered the ability to cut through steel with his sword. (Coiling Dragon)

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Former Name

Name:– Improvised Attack
Fighting Style:– Drunk Tavern Brawling
Rank:– 0
Description:– Gen grabs the closest available item or thing be it a chair or even a freaking tree and slams it onto his opponent.
Cost:-- 0 xpz

New Name:

Name:– Damashi Uchi || だまし討ち ["Foul Play" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 0
Description:– Gen grabs the closest available item or thing be it a chair or even a freaking tree and slams it onto his opponent.
Cost:-- 0 xpz

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Former Name:

Name:– Drunken Stupor
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen imitates the stumbling and bumbling of a drunk man. By swaying around like a drunken man his body is set to lose and able to flail smoothly helping him evade attacks with almost supernatural ease. (Kami-e Clone)
Cost:-- 125 xpz

New Name:

Name:– Deisui || 泥酔 ["Dead Drunk" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Tavern Brawling
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen imitates the stumbling and bumbling of a drunk man. By swaying around like a drunken man his body is set to lose and able to flail smoothly helping him evade attacks with almost supernatural ease. (Kami-e Clone)
Cost:-- 125 xpz

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Former Name:

Name:– Alcoholic Instability
Fighting Style:– Drunk Tavern Brawling
Rank:– 1
Description:– Gen sways back and forth as he walks. This swaying motion is concentrated around his body weight which acts as an anchor for his stability. When Gen attacks someone while in motion he is capable of putting all his body weight into the force of his attack.
Cost:-- 50 xpz

New Name:

Name:– Shuran || 酒乱 ["Drunkard" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 1
Description:– Gen sways back and forth as he walks. This swaying motion is concentrated around his body weight which acts as an anchor for his stability. When Gen attacks someone while in motion he is capable of putting all his body weight into the force of his attack.
Cost:-- 50 xpz

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Former Name:

Name:– Stumble to Heaven
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen has devised a technique that allows him to stumble his way into the heavens! By kicking the air with sufficient speed and force, he can remain aloft so long as your stamina allows him to, and even propel yourself in different directions to remain mobile in order to evade and attack. This technique can be hindered substantially by weighing the user down or binding their legs in some way. (Geppo Clone)
Cost:-- 125 xpz (Rebait)

New Name:

Name:– Tsumazuku ni Tenkai || 躓くに 天界 ["Stumble to Heaven" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen has devised a technique that allows him to stumble his way into the heavens! By kicking the air with sufficient speed and force, he can remain aloft so long as your stamina allows him to, and even propel yourself in different directions to remain mobile in order to evade and attack. This technique can be hindered substantially by weighing the user down or binding their legs in some way. (Geppo Clone)
Cost:-- 125 xpz (Rebait)

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Former Name:

Name:– Wings of Tempest
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen spins with his arms sticking out to create a dragon-like tornado that both strikes and blows away enemies.
Cost:-- 125 xpz



New Name:

Name:– Memai o Kanjiru || めまいがする ["Dizzy Feeling" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen does a rapid dizzy spin with his arms sticking out to create a dragon-like tornado that both strikes and blows away enemies.
Cost:-- 125 xpz

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FiST UPGRADES

Name:– Drunk Man's Fist
Focus:– Dirty Tricks, Improvising, Martial Arts, Alcoholism
Class:– D --> C [+350 xpz] [+125 xpz rebate]
Description:– A style of fighting that involves an intoxicated state as well as the imitation of an intoxicated state. This fighting style also involves improvision, cunning, and some semblance of martial arts.

New Aspect:--
• 山天狗 || Yamatengu [Mountain Tengu]
Gen becomes the face of the mountain developing yet another supernatural ability the cement him as more inhuman than before. That being... great strength! With sheer brute force, the Tengu is capable of shattering both stone and steel.

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MARTIAL TECHS

Name:– Neji-mawashi || ねじ回し ["Screwdriver" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 3
Description:– A technique named after the alcoholic beverage "screwdriver"! Similar to Shigan, Gen does a quick attack with the speed of a bullet using his fingertips. The difference between this technique and Shigan, however, is firstly the use of both the index and middle finger which are wrapped around each other. The second difference is the strength behind it which allows its user to shatter steel and stone  a like. This technique deals similar damage to a high caliber firearm. (225 xpz)

Name:– Burū Ragūn || ブルー・ラグーン ("Blue Lagoon" in Japanese)
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Named after the alcoholic beverage Blue Lagoon, this technique incorporates the very concept of Geppo but in water. Gen was able to deduce that if he was capable of kicking with enough force to create propulsion in the air the same could be applied in water and likely with less issue. (125xpz)

Name:– Tekirashoto || テキーラショット["Tequila Shot" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– Gen douses his fingers in alcohol and shoots a droplet of alcohol at his opponent. The droplet can become a deadly bullet with the kinetic force created by his immense strength. (125 xpz)[Rebait]

Name:– Keihi Genshu || 桂皮原酒 ["Cinnamon Whiskey" in Japanese]
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man's Fist
Rank:– 3
Description:– Similar to Tekirashoto, except Gen ignites the liquor after he douses his fingers in alcohol so instead of shooting a high-speed droplet of alcohol he shoots a fireball at his opponent. (225 xpz) (100 xpz)

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TOTALS

X-Poinz Available: 906 xpz
X-Poinz Spent: - 800 xpz
X-Poinz Left: 106 xpz
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FiST Upgrade: - 350 xpz
FiST Rebate: - 125 xpz

[Vio]

<sup>Hey, Fennec!

Everything pretty much seems A-OK, but I need some clarification on a couple of things.

First of all, Tora Tobu. Is this meant to be a Kamisori clone? As it reads, it seems just like him using his Geppou clone repeatedly rather than doing anything particularly special, so I’m unsure as to whether or not this is deserving of a Technique. If it is a Kamisori clone, you run into the issue of needing an appropriate Aspect (to match up with either the Geppou or Soru side of it).

Second off, Rank 3 Techniques cost 225 X-Poinz, not 250, so you’ll need to correct your math. Also, if you’re using any Rebate, make sure to clarify where you’re using it!

Please make the appropriate changes and let me know.</sup>

[Fennec]

It was originally meant as Kamisori however I was unaware it would require an aspect of sorts. I'll hold off on that for now. Instead I purchased Buru Ragun which is a Geppo clone for underwater use. I fixed my math changing all my rank three techs to 225 instead of 250 xpz
I also put the rebate next to Tekkira Shoto since that's what I spent it on. 
I hope everything else looks good. 

[Vio]

<sup>Hey, Fennec!

That’s fine — Rokushiki is already something pretty special, so the ruling is that (in order to do anything extremely complicated) you need to have “Mastered” one of the relevant styles, or something equivalent to it.

Everything adds up and seems A-OK, so please update Gen’s profile!</sup>

[Fennec]

Character’s Name: Gen Momochi
Profile:  link
Devil Fruit: N/A
Current X-Poinz: 1731 xpz

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TECHNIQUES

Name:– Sawāsanraizu || サワーサンライズ ("Sour Sunrise" in Japanese)
Fighting Style:– Drunk Man Fist
Rank:– 2
Description:– After taking a swig of alchohol Gen uses his flames to 'breath fire' and spew out a cone of orange colored flames at his openent. This is named after a cocktail made using whiskey and citrus juice. (125xpz)

FiST associated with new tech below...

SPOILER: Click to show

{Spoiler}Name: Drunk Man's Fist
Focus: Dirty Tricks, Improvising, Martial Arts, Alcoholism
Class: C
Description:

A style of fighting that involves an intoxicated state as well as the imitation of an intoxicated state. This fighting style also involves improvision, cunning, and some semblance of martial arts.

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TOTALS

X-Poinz Available: 181 xpz
X-Poinz Spent: 125 xpz
X-Poinz Left: 56

[Vio]

<sup>Oh, hi, Fennec!

Well, one day in the future you won’t be the only fire-breather! Consider this one Approved!</sup>