Nichi Nichi no Mi

[Blushing z0ro]

<Nichi Nichi No Mi>

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English Name:– Sun Sun Fruit
Classification:– Paramecia
Owned By:– Champollion Carter

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Appearance:– A Bright yellow and orange honeydew melon that seems to faintly radiate light and heat. This fruit, like all Devil Fruits, tastes horrible, this one having a particular blend of overwhelming sickly sweetness as well as being painfully hot to eat.

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Ability:– Allows the user to become a “Sun Human” , a being capable of releasing and controlling the superheated stellar plasma of a sun from their very body. When using the abilities of the Nichi Nichi no Mi part of the user’s body will begin to start looking like the surface of a distant sun with the constant shift and leoparding pattern of such a celestial body as the surface would ignite the air around it into golden fire, but that would be almost impossible to see due to the overwhelming brightness of the light emanating from any such spot.

While possible for the user to adjust the brightness of their power it would require immense practice as the volatile nature of a sun’s power makes it notoriously difficult to control, if not borderline impossible.

The most basic offensive use of this fruit’s power would be to simply release the power of the celestial body in a wave or blast of stellar fire and energy.


Weaknesses:–

Standard Devil Fruit Weaknesses: Sea Stone will cancel the power of the fruit and being submerged in water will sap all strength from the user.

Physical Damage: The internal forces of the sun causes the user’s body to become more fragile, any form of physical damage will be more severe and felt tenfold as the very power of their fruit wreacks havok within their own body.

Water: Being doused with enough water can cause the power of the sun to dim temporarily, weakening the power the user can bring out significantly as well making their body somehow more "brittle" making the physical damage weakness even more pronounced.

[Jade]

Hey Blushing z0ro! It feels like it's been a while since the last time I handled one of your applications, but here I am today to correct that! I come to you today with some good news, and some bad news. We'll start with the good news first: After some staff discussion in which we re-evaluated the core concept of this Fruit and its relation to being a workable concept for a Fruit, we came to the conclusion that, yes, it remains viable.

Now for the bad news. As it stands, this Fruit seems to exist in the realm of the actual science of stars, with mentions of thermonuclear power and such. Unfortunately, we'll need to ask you to remove these elements and focus in on more of a "thematic" approach to your Sun Human. Something like a "stellar plasma generation and manipulation" ability may be more suited to bringing this concept to life, bringing the ability back down to earth a little, as it were.

On that topic, the idea of an utterly uncontrollable Devil Fruit power by its own nature is something we are going to reject. It is entirely possible for the user to struggle to control the ability, but in and of itself, this is not a workable facet of the ability itself for the purposes of approval, especially as a "limiting factor" of the ability. And while we're on the topic of the Weaknesses, the Physical Damage Weakness isn't actually approvable in its current state either on a conceptual level - it comes across like saying a bomb is weak to physical damage, even though it explodes in the process. A Weakness is something that others can properly take advantage of against the user and their abilities, not something that blows up in their face.

I know this is a sort of sweeping review, rather than addressing anything terribly specific about the ability, but we'll need to address these conceptual foibles before we can get into the nitty-gritty of a true review. Once you've made your changes, please respond here so we can continue with the approval process!

[Blushing z0ro]

Right, I made a few changes which I think should have adressed all the issues you have brought up Jade Let me know if anything else needs fixing or editing.

[Jade]

Hm, I see. Well... I don't know if I have any particularly good news to start off with this time, so I'll just jump right into the problems that will need to be and still need to be addressed.

For a start, although the specific wording referring to "thermonuclear" stuff has been removed, the Fruit is still functioning as if this were the case. You can thematically be a star, but not literally - you'll need to dial back the sheer power output a few notches. To use a metaphor, on a scale of 1 to 5, the Fruit's currently an 11. For example, things like mentions of igniting the air around the user because of the sheer heat their body is outputting will need to be removed, though can possibly be replaced with something thematic that appears similar; I doubt you want your character to suffer asphyxiation immediately after eating the Fruit, after all. Additionally, the current wording of the sheer heat and power output of the Fruit puts it in direct contradiction of the Water Weakness. After all, how is water supposed to even make contact with the user if they're so hot that they're causing the air to combust around them?

You still have mentions of aspects of the Fruit's ability being "notoriously difficult to control, if not borderline impossible" - if it is possible for this to be controlled at all, then that is going to be the sum of it. If the character has difficulty controlling the ability, that is something that should be mentioned with the character, not the Fruit's innate ability.

After additional review of the Physical Damage Trait, I'm afraid I will need to reject it as-is. Devil Fruits grant an inherent protection against their ability to their users that fundamentally clashes with what this Weakness is trying to represent; the user's ability would not give them backlash in response to physical trauma in the way this Weakness is describing.

To summarize: You will need to scale the sheer power of the ability back to "thematic" rather than "near-literal" levels, clear up the issues with what can and cannot be controlled, and review and-or revise the Fruit's unique Weaknesses. Once you have made the required changes, please respond here so that we can continue with the approval process.

[Fox]

Hi Blushing z0ro! Are you still interested in pursuing this Devil Fruit? Please respond within 7 days or this application will be locked and archived!

[Fox]

Archived due to lack of response.

[div align="center"][font size="3"][b]<Nichi Nichi No Mi>[/b][/font][/div]
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[b]English Name:–[/b] Sun Sun Fruit
[b]Classification:–[/b] Paramecia
[b]Owned By:–[/b] [a href="https://strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/28353/champollion-carter"]Champollion Carter[/a]
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[b]Appearance:–[/b] A Bright yellow and orange honeydew melon that seems to faintly radiate light and heat. This fruit, like all Devil Fruits, tastes horrible, this one having a particular blend of overwhelming sickly sweetness as well as being painfully hot to eat.


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[b]Ability:–[/b] Allows the user to become a “Sun Human” , a being capable of releasing and controlling the superheated stellar plasma of a sun from their very body. When using the abilities of the Nichi Nichi no Mi part of the user’s body will begin to start looking like the surface of a distant sun with the constant shift and leoparding pattern of such a celestial body as the surface would ignite the air around it into golden fire, but that would be almost impossible to see due to the overwhelming brightness of the light emanating from any such spot.

While possible for the user to adjust the brightness of their power it would require immense practice as the volatile nature of a sun’s power makes it notoriously difficult to control, if not borderline impossible.

The most basic offensive use of this fruit’s power would be to simply release the power of the celestial body in a wave or blast of stellar fire and energy.


[b]Weaknesses:–[/b]

Standard Devil Fruit Weaknesses: Sea Stone will cancel the power of the fruit and being submerged in water will sap all strength from the user.

Physical Damage: The internal forces of the sun causes the user’s body to become more fragile, any form of physical damage will be more severe and felt tenfold as the very power of their fruit wreacks havok within their own body.
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Water: Being doused with enough water can cause the power of the sun to dim temporarily, weakening the power the user can bring out significantly as well making their body somehow more "brittle" making the physical damage weakness even more pronounced.

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