Tokoz's Techniques

[Tokoz]

Character’s Name:– Lassa Iskario
Profile:– Link
Devil Fruit:– Nuno Nuno no Mi
Current X-Poinz:– 663

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Name:– Rokushiki (Six Powers)
Focus:– Assassination
Class:– D (+200)
New Aspect:– Soru Mastery: The user has specialized in swift movement, allowing for many movements in the time it would take a normal person to do one. This is helpful in using techniques like Soru for longer periods, as well as such things as rapidfire Shigan or using Soru in mid-air with Geppou

Shigan (“Finger Gun”) (Rank 2)
A close-quarter combat technique in which the user stabs forth with their finger extended, piercing a target’s body and inflicting a wound akin to a bullet wound as a result. Shigan is an ineffective means of defence, as the finger is quite fragile compared to a move like Tekkai, and it is really only effective at piercing flesh.

(I would like to replace:
Nerve Breakdown [Rank 2]
The user grabs a limb and brings a blow slamming down into a nerve cluster, limiting use of that limb or even potentially knocking someone out, should it be aimed at the head or vitals.

with Shigan, due to being similar in intent and deciding the initial concept behind the technique is not as appealing. Call it a prelude to knowing Shigan or something?)

Soru (“Shave”)  (Rank 2: 125 XP) (Using 125 Rebate from D-Class Fighting Style
By kicking the ground multiple times in the blink of an eye, the user can move at such speeds that they become practically invisible to those incapable of tracking high speed movements, making them seem to disappear. Again, Soru is negated if one can somehow bind the would-be user’s legs, or otherwise weigh them down.


Name:– Cloth Arts
Focus:– Binding, Disguise
Class:– E 
Description:– A combat style created from the basis of Lassa's Devil Fruit, focused on both disguise and combat.

-Quick-change (Rank 0)
The user produces a new set of standard clothing from their body rapidly, appearing to change what they are wearing to something different. Allows for sudden, if minimal, disguise from a distance. Does not do much to hold up to close inspection, but good for vanishing into crowds.

-Cloth Wrapping (Rank 1) (50 XP)
The user lashes out with their cloth, whipping it around a body part to hinder or blind the target, or even pull them closer. Can be useful for climbing as well. 

Traits:

Ragman/Ragwoman
Devil Fruit Trait
Lassa has become a Rag Person, given the ability to produce and control cloth.
They lose these abilities when submerged in water as with all Devil Fruit Users, and
their cloth is easily damaged by bleach, acid, or fabric softener

Inhuman Toughness
D-Rank Trait
Lassa is much tougher than your average human, capable of taking more damage and shrugging off more blows than most people would be able to. 


D-Class Upgrade Rokushiki (200)
+125 Rebate
- 125 Soru

- 200 (Devil Fruit)
+100 Rebate
- 50 (Cloth Wrapping)

Total: 400

  

[Fox]

Hey Tokoz!

I'm gonna need you to write up a description on your Aspect. Rapid Movements doesn't tell me much. A lot of what techniques that your aspect will enable rely on this description, so please do that.

Quick Change is an R0 Tech to me, so feel free to keep it. Just change the rank. Also, when eating a Devil Fruit, you get a Devil Fruit Trait to describe your new abilities. Its usually in the "Fruit Race" format. For instance, "Rubber Human".

It is worth noting that we don't really allow for swapping out of Techniques and we're making a special allowance this time for you to switch Nerve Breakdown for Shigan. Alternatively, we've also deemed that Nerve Breakdown is more akin to an R1 Technique, which lowers its cost. This may change your mind about keeping it, so let me know what you want to do.

Let me know when you've made the changes with a reply and I'll take another look.

[Tokoz]

Think that's everything, hopefully we're good to go!

[Fox]

Hmm...we're looking better.

I can approve Cloth Arts and its Techniques as well as the Trait's you've applied for, so consider them Approved.

However, the Rokushiki Aspect reads a little... strange to me? It feels like you want Soru Mastery - which would allow you to combine Soru's high speed movement with other R2 and above techniques like Shigan. Is that what you want?

Please clarify and then reply!

[Tokoz]

Oh. Yeah, that sounds pretty much exactly what I want. Changed

[Fox]

Mhm! Yup! Okay! Approved!

[Tokoz]

Character’s Name:– Lassa Iskario
Profile:– Link
Devil Fruit:– Nuno Nuno no Mi
Current X-Poinz:– 1319

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Name:– Rokushiki (Six Powers)
Focus:– Assassination
Class:– D 
Aspects:– Soru Mastery

Geppō (“Moon Step”) [Rank 2]
By kicking the air with sufficient speed and force, you can remain aloft so long as your stamina allows you to, and even propel yourself in different directions to remain mobile in order to evade and attack. Geppō can be hindered substantially by weighing the user down or binding their legs in some way.
Cost: 75 Xpoinz/50 Rebate Xpoinz

Rankyaku (“Storm Leg”) [Rank 2]
By kicking with sufficient speed and strength, the user can generate a slicing projectile of compressed air, similar to a swordsman’s Flying Slash Attack. As with Geppō, restraining the user makes it almost impossible to use Rankyaku properly, if at all.
Cost: 125

Kami-e (“Paper Drawing”) [Rank 2]
Allowing one’s body to turn limp and flexible, the user can float and dodge attacks very easily as if they were a piece of paper fluttering in a breeze. Kami-e is an effective countermeasure to attacks that would otherwise break through the defences of Tekkai, but it can be rendered useless if the user is somehow grappled or confined.
Cost: 125

Kamisori ("Razor") [Rank 3]
(Geppo Variant)
Aspects: Soru Mastery
Utilizing one's mastery of Soru, the user can kick off the air ten times in a single second, effectively combining the two skills of Soru and Geppo to achieve high-speed aerial movement. 
Cost: 100

Rankyaku: Crescent Moon Guilotine [Rank 3]
(Rankyaku Variant)
Aspects: Soru Mastery
With the speed of Soru and the cutting force of Rankyaku, the user may kick many times at once. Rather than the usual single arc of cutting air, this leads to a cutting "wall" that continues for a few moments. This can potentially do more damage, or even cut off an escape route. 
Cost: 100

Total: 525

[Jade]

Alright, get ready for an interesting answer to this application, Tok! I'm able to approve Geppō, Rankyaku, and Kami-e at this time, at the prices you've listed out. (This comes out to a total of 325 XPz and 50 Rebate XPz, for handy-dandy staff purposes.)

However, I'm afraid I'm going to need to hold Kamisori and Rankyaku: Crescent Moon Guillotine back from approval for the moment for one very simple reason - you're using the variant Technique pricing for them, but you haven't told us what they're actually variants of. This may be a nitpick, especially with the Rokushiki Techniques, but it is important to have this written down! Please be sure to include this information going forward as well to avoid any potential headaches like this.

While I have you here... You'll need to update Lassa's profile to include a link to the Nuno Nuno no Mi somewhere. Also, somehow your spent XPz total has gotten warped, at least before this approval - the staff numbers have Lassa at 650 XPz spent between the original profile (250), the Devil Fruit (200), and Lassa's last set of purchases in this thread (200). (This would be 975 XPz after the Techniques approved by this response.) Please ensure you fix these things up on the updated profile!

[Tokoz]

Changes made

[Jade]

Alright! We're looking good, then. Approved! Please make sure you update Lassa's profile accordingly!

[Tokoz]

Character’s Name:– Lassa Iskario
Profile:– Link
Devil Fruit:– Nuno Nuno no Mi
Current X-Poinz:– 2148

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Name:– Rokushiki (Six Powers)
Focus:– Assassination
Class:– C (+300)(150 Rebate)
New Aspect:– Rankyaku Mastery: The user has specialized in the art of allowing a blunt limb to cut with air, improving their ability with Rankyaku techniques as well as allowing for other twists on kicks and air slashes produced from blunt sources

Rankyaku: Full Moon Guillotine [Rank 4]
Original:– Rankyaku [2], Crescent Moon Guillotine [3]
Aspects: Soru Mastery, Rankyaku Mastery
With the speed of Soru and the newly mastered cutting force of Rankyaku, the user may kick many times at once. Rather than the usual single arc of cutting air, this leads to a cutting "wall" that continues, creating a temporary layer of cutting wind akin to an aerial ripcurrent. The force involved is greatly increased from Crescent Moon Guillotine.
(Cost: 125 Rebate)

Name:– Cloth Arts
Focus:– Binding, Disguise
Rank:– C (+500)/(+275 Rebate)
New Aspect:–
Constructs: Lassa has learned to create full and consistent constructs out of her cloth. This can be a simple as a limb, or as complex as a full doll. 

Armored Cloth: Lassa is capable of reinforcing the cloth, giving it greater durability and resistance to damage. 

Name:– Veiled Dancers (Upgrade of Cloth Binding) (-75 Rebate)
Fighting Style:– Cloth Arts
Rank:– 2
Description:–
[Aspect: Constructs] Lassa creates a floating 'doll' made out of cloth, capable of grabbing and binding an opponent, but not fully attacking. Lassa can disguise themselves as one of these dolls, making it difficult to tell where attacks are truly coming from. 

Name:– Moon Veil Dancers (Upgrade of Veiled Dancers) (-100 Rebate)
Fighting Style:– Cloth Arts
Rank:– 3
Description:–
[Aspect: Constructs, Rankyaku Mastery] Lassa creates a floating 'doll' made out of cloth, capable of grabbing and binding an opponent, as well as "slashing" with it's limbs to do damage. Lassa can disguise themselves as one of these dolls, making it difficult to tell where attacks are truly coming from.

Name:– Full Moon Dancers (Upgrade of Moon Veil Dancers) (-125 Rebate)
Fighting Style:– Cloth Arts
Rank:– 4
Description:–
[Aspect: Constructs, Rankyaku Mastery, Armored Cloth] Lassa creates a floating 'doll' made out of cloth, capable of grabbing and binding an opponent, as well as "slashing" with it's limbs to do damage. The reinforced cloth means that these dolls can take a beating as well. Lassa can disguise themselves as one of these dolls, making it difficult to tell where attacks are truly coming from.

Cloth Tag [Rank 0]
Fighting Style: Cloth Arts
Creating a small patch of cloth, Lassa places it on a person or item and keeps focus on it, allowing them to track the movements of the thing in question without having direct line of sight. The tracking isn't precise enough to allow for mid-combat use, but it is helpful for keeping track of allies or enemies within a relatively local area.

Overdrive:— Red Rebis
Fighting Style:— Rokushiki
Rank:— 1 (Aspect-Like +2)/(Drawback -1)
Description:—
Lassa's body takes on a reddish hue, veins bulging and heart thundering. The overclocking of the heart improves their ability to move, increasing their speed and therefor the power of attacks when the limb is moving. It does not translate into increased ability to lift, grapple, or otherwise utilize strength when momentum is prevented. Additionally, the excess strain on the heart forces the user to drop the effect before too long, or risk more than just exhaustion and damaged muscles.
Enhancements: High-Speed Movements
Drawbacks: High-Speed Heart


Inhuman Stamina
C-Rank Trait
Lassa is capable of taking more hits, operating for longer in combat, and other feats of stamina that surpass the average person. 


-300 C-Class Upgrade Rokushiki 
+150 Rebate
- 150 (Red Rebis)
+50 Rebate
-125 (Rebate) Full Moon Guillotine
-200 D-Class Upgrade Cloth Arts 
+125 Rebate
-300 C-Class Upgrade Cloth Arts 
+150 Rebate
-75 Veiled Dancers
-100 Moon Veil Dancers
-125 Full Moon Dancers


Total: 950 
Gained: 50 Rebate

[Vio]

^{Hey, Tokoz! All-in-all, these seem fine. Consider these and your budget Vivre Card Approved!}

[Tokoz]

Character’s Name:– Lassa Iskario
Profile:– Link
Devil Fruit:–Nuno Nuno no Mi
Current X-Poinz:– 3270

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Name:– Rokushiki (Six Powers)
Focus:– Assassination
Class:– B (-400)(+175 Rebate)
New Aspect:– Tekkai Mastery: The user has specialized in the art of defense, allowing themselves to utilize the sudden muscle-tensing and hardening of Tekkai to allow for a variety of new uses. They may even be able to move while using the technique!

Rankyaku: Eclipse Guillotine [Rank 5]
Aspects: Soru Mastery, Rankyaku Mastery, Tekkai Mastery
With the speed of Soru, the tensing strength of Tekkai, and the cutting force of Rankyaku, the user may kick many times at once with intense and sudden force. Rather than the usual single arc of cutting air, this leads to a cutting "wall" that continues, creating a temporary layer of cutting wind akin to an aerial ripcurrent. The force is capable of denting and slashing stone and even metal, but cannot cut it in the same way a sword master could. 
(-150 Rebate)


Name:– Cloth Arts
Focus:– Binding, Disguise
Class:– B (-400)(+175 Rebate)
Description:– A combat style created from the basis of Lassa's Devil Fruit, focused on both disguise and combat.
New Aspect:
Cloth Paintings: Lassa's manipulation of Cloth has grown so fine, they can produce images and details with startlingly lifelike accuracy. It would take a very keen eye or a physical inspection to discern the difference between one of their constructs and the real thing.

Blood Moon Dancers [Rank 5]
Aspects: Constructs, Rankyaku Mastery, Armored Cloth, Cloth Paintings
Lassa creates a floating 'doll' made out of cloth, capable of grabbing and binding an opponent, as well as "slashing" with it's limbs to do damage. The reinforced cloth means that these dolls can take a beating as well. Lassa can disguise themselves as one of these dolls, making it difficult to tell where attacks are truly coming from. With their new ability to mimic other materials, these dolls can disguise themselves against walls, appear to 'bleed', or even appear to be Lassa themselves. 
(-150 Rebate)

ADVANCEMENT I: 
Tier Ⅰ Awakening
Requires: Class “B” Fighting Style
This Advancement allows the user to expand the influence of their power into their surroundings—a feature seen in use by both Doflamingo and Katakuri—and thus transform their surroundings into the very thing their power allows them to produce (usually with an initial point of contact to trigger the effect). Furthermore, it allows the user to manipulate these additional sources mentally. 
(-150 XP)


B-Class Trait Gained: Inhuman Swiftness
Intense training or natural agility make you capable of moving much faster than the average person, running at speeds akin to an athlete, and moving quickly enough that you can make yourself a difficult target. You’re fast and evasive.


Cost: 
-950 XP
+175 Rebate XP
+175 Rebate XP
-150 Rebate XP
-150 Rebate XP

[Vio]

^{Alright, Tokoz! We’re good to call this insane set of skills Approved!}