Fearjunkie's Dojo

[fearjunkie]

Character’s Name: John Culliford
Profile: Link
Devil Fruit: None yet
Current X-Poinz: 300

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Fighting Styles

Name: Erlyn-Style Swordfighting
Focus: Swords, pistols, defense, evasion
Class: E
Description: Pioneered on Erlyn Island, Erlyn-Style Swordfighting is a school of swordsmanship that uses both the cutlass and the pistol in equal measure. It is known for its highly defensive nature, emphasizing parrying and strategic footwork to outmaneuver foes while swashbuckling. The hallmark technique of Erlyn-Style Sword fighting is the Jackal maneuver, which uses a pistol held in a tonfa grip to block melee attacks and pistol whip opponents. 

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Techniques

Name: Erlyn Style - Hummingbird
Fighting Style: Erlyn-Style Swordfighting
Rank: 1
Description: A precise shot aimed at the opponent's hand, meant to force them to drop their weapon.

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Cost

Spent XPz: 50
Remaining XPz: 250

[Fennec]

Hello fearjunkie, I'll be taking care of this one. There are a few points I would like to touch upon so I'll spread it out a tad bit.

▪︎ First, in the area where it says "Rank" you put "E", I would like to point out that Rank and Class are different. Classes come in letters, E, D, C, B, A, S and ranks come in numbers 1, 2, 3, 4, ect. Basically, techniques use ranks and not classes. If you want we can talk about it more in depth on discord. 

▪︎Well with that out of the way! So! This isn't actually a technique? It reads more like flavor text for the description of the FiST. That said you are more than welcome to add this bit into your FiST description. 

Anyways! As always! Have fun! 

[fearjunkie]

Made the required changes and changed the requested technique.

[Fennec]

Hello fearjunkie, this looks good! You're almost there. There is simply one minor error and that is in the used up X-Poinz. Remember a rank 1 technique costs 50 X-Poinz! So you have to list the purchase. You can see the listing of prices per rank here in the site's dojo guide made by Vio. That said once you're done please @ me on here! (On site not discord) and notify me of the changes.

[fearjunkie]

Fennec Made the requested changes.

[Fennec]

Okay!! fearjunkie! Consider this one...
APPROVED!

[fearjunkie]

Requesting to change the name of "Erlyn Style - Scorpion" to "Erlyn Style - Hummingbird"

[Fox]

Approved!

[fearjunkie]

Character’s Name: John Culliford
Profile: Link
Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Ghost
Current X-Poinz: 648 (148 available +250 rebate for 398)

NEW FIGHTING STYLE

Name: Phantom Erlyn Style

Focus: Devil Fruit, Swords, Pistols

Class: D

Description: Combining the supernatural powers of his Zoan transformations alongside the manueverability of Erlyn-Style Swordfighting, John can use invisibility, flight and intangibility to strike from positions that would be otherwise impossible for him. 

NEW TECHNIQUES

Name: Kingfisher

Fighting Style: Phantom Erlyn Style

Rank: 1

Description: Using invisibility and flight, John flies directly upwards, going high over his target's head before plummeting downward for a plunging attack with his sword.

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Name: Hamerkop

Fighting Style: Phantom Erlyn Style



Rank: 1



Description: Using intangibility to hide within a solid object, John lies in wait until the target draws close enough to jump out of cover and hit them with a surprise point-blank shot.

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Cost
Spent XPz: 300
Remaining XPz: 98

[Fox]

So, unfortunately, fearjunkie, you can't afford a D class Fighting Style at the moment! Fighting Style upgrades can only be bought with XPz, not rebate. Sorry! Please feel free to post this again when you're ready, but for now, I'm afraid this application is Denied.