Warlord's Power! [Marshall]

[Smiley]

Marshall Marrow Soben!

Available XPz: 428

-200 (DF FiST D Rank upgrade)

-200 (FiST D Rank upgrade)

-25 (Half payment of Crowd Control)

XPz Left: 3

Available Rebate:

+125 (FiST D Rank Rebate - Hone Hone no Mi)

-125 (Phalange Claw)

+125 (FiST D Rank Rebate - Warlord's Tactics)

-50 (Great March)

-50 (Trickery and Deceit)

-25 (Half Payment of Crowd Control)

Rebate Left: 0

The Trait is the 600 XPz threshold free trait.

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Hone Hone no Mi

Name:– Hone Hone no Mi
Focus:– Close to Midrange Combat
Rank:– D
New Aspect:– Advanced Mechanisms - Through serious study of engineering and scientific papers and books, Marshall has attained and continues to attain knowledge of mechanisms which he is, then, able to recreate as best as he can, with obvious material limitations, with his bone creation powers, forgoing the fuel or programming requirements by using his own energy and mind as substitutes, respectively.

Name:– Phalange Claw
Fighting Style:– Hone Hone no Mi - A.M.
Rank:–2
Description:–Marshall creates a claw attached to a chain that is launched in an autonomous manner towards any target, with a medium range limit. Thanks to his control, the chain's length can vary, as well as the claw's size, to adapt to its targets. Once it has grabbed onto something, it pulls it towards the user - or, if it's too heavy, pulls the user towards the target.

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Warlord's Tactics

Name:– Warlord's Tactics
Focus:– Brutal, visceral blows to weak points.
Rank:– D
New Aspect:– Desert Sun - Thanks to a strength of will that defies the very limitations of the soul, honed by a life of constant struggle under a sun that more than once burned even the hardiest of men into a dry, burnt husk, Marshall's soul has become able to manifest flame itself, one that burns bright and hellishly hot. This flame is entirely real and functional, able to burn anything flammable and melt what cannot endure its unforgiving heat.

Name:– Great March
Fighting Style:– Warlord's Tactics
Rank:–1
Description:–Marshall swings his mace repeatedly at an enemy with brutal, cruel strength, using his strength and momentum to maintain a constant overwhelming pressure.

Name:– Decisive Charge
Fighting Style:– Warlord's Tactics
Rank:–1
Description:–Marshall takes a wide stance with his mace in his right, dominant hand and places his left hand around his shoulder. He then charges at an enemy at full speed, swinging with great ferocity, with added power from the stability his left hand offers and the twisting motion his body performs when swinging.

Name:– Crowd Control
Fighting Style:– Warlord's Tactics
Rank:–1
Description:–Marshall charges at any number of enemies, finishing it with a rather quick 360 sweep of his mace, designed to slam into and take down any opponent that cannot stop it.

Name:– Man-apult
Fighting Style:– Warlord's Tactics
Rank:–0

Description:–Marshall puts his terrifying levels of strength to good use and leaps high and far into the sky, as if he actually took flight. There's no secret to it, other than a simple jump taken to ludicrous levels with sheer power.

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Traits

Winds of Alabasta (Speed)
600-XPz

Description: Speed was always necessary when it came to hunting the large monsters of Alabasta, lest one become their next meal that couldn't escape. With Marshall's experience in hunting said monsters and becoming accostumed to his armor, he is capable of, even in armor, sprinting and moving at speeds that go way beyond human limits.

Naval Engineer

Description: Marshall has gone back to the studies of his young pre-teen days, sinking incredible amounts of energy into learning anything and everything he can about ships and anything ship-related. Thanks to that, as well as previous knowledge, the Tyrant is a surprisingly effective and clever shipwright and engineer.

[Vio]

<sup>Hey, Smiley!

So, both of these Aspects seem perfectly fine, though, you may want to correct this application so that the FiSts are properly listed? You’ve got “DF FiSt” twice in the expenditures, and seem to have a double-up of your FiSt name and focus going on in the app proper.

As for your chosen Techniques, I think these are fine, though I’m unsure if Trickery and Deceit is actually worth an entire Technique, given it’s more or less a “standard” use of his chosen type of weapon. If this was doing something a bit more particular for the counterattack, then I’d say it’s worth it.

Your Trait is also good to go, as is the Skill.

So, this is just down to you deciding what to do with Trickery and Deceit and the necessary clean-ups. So, the standard approval process applies here before anything is truly given.</sup>

[Smiley]

Everything is fixed!

[Vio]

^{Alrighty! In which case, this looks all good to go!}