Daz Techniques

[dazbreaker]

Character’s Name:–
Zerahza Zira
Profile:–
 strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/26062/zerahza-zira-update?page=1&scrollTo=109780
Devil Fruit:–
N/A
Current X-Poinz:– 421 (171 unspent)



Name:– Doctors Touch
Fighting Style:–Thunder Clinic
Rank:–1
Description:– Zira uses her in depth knowledge of anatomy to strike her opponent directly in a pressure point using her index and middle fingers.  These strikes do little direct damage, but can cause partial paralysis of limbs or temporary loss of consciousness. This technique is less effective against targets with Inhuman Toughness, or if their pressure points are otherwise obscured by armor.

Name:–Trauma Hoof
Fighting Style:–Thunder Clinic
Rank:–1
Description:– Zira spins around on one hoof, building up momentum before whipping her long leg out to deliver a brutal spin kick with serious impact.  Intended to be a finishing hit, and combined with her metal shod hooves can smash through most conventional materials.

Name:– Scalpel Shot
Fighting Style:–Thunder Clinic
Rank:–1
Description:– Zira readies one to five surgical scalpels and throws them at an opponent with precision.  While they are small and damage of individual scalpels is low, they are extremely sharp, cutting deeply causing blood loss, and damage can build up with a few well placed hits.

[Vio]

<sup>Hey, Daz!

So, for reference, the way Electro works is that it’s basically a free Aspect, so when you’re applying it in specific ways to Techniques you’re also boosting the Rank of that Technique — you’re adding a level of complexity to it! So, I’m going to have to ask you to rethink which options you’re taking for Zira, and to recalculate your costs accordingly.

Thanks!</sup>

[dazbreaker]

Ok fixed.  Is this better?

[Vio]

<sup>Seems good! You can always get upgraded versions later that apply Electro!

Approved!</sup>

[dazbreaker]

Character’s Name:– Zerahza Zira

Profile:– strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/26062/zerahza-zira-update

Devil Fruit:– N/A 

Current X-Poinz:– 564 (164 unspent)

Improved Techniques

Name:– Shock Therapy -75 xpz

Original:– Doctors Touch

Rank:– 2

Description:– Zerahza applies Electro to her Doctors Touch technique.  Functionally unchanged in process, she strikes an opponent with her fingertips, aiming for nerve clusters and critical muscle groups.  However in this variation she releases a very intense burst of Electro into her opponent when she strikes, dramatically increasing the damage of this attack.  While the physical strike is still ineffective against armored opponents and foes with the Inhuman Toughness trait, the Electro aspect of this can bypass conventional defenses and deal damage regardless.

Name:– Surgical Bolt -75 xpz

Original:– Scalpel Shot
Rank:– 2



Description:– Zerahza prepares one to five of her scalpels just as normal, however in this variation she charges the projectiles with an intense Electro charge that is released upon connecting with their target.  Individual scalpels do not do major damage on their own, but they can cause profuse bleeding, and harass her targets with minor damage over time building into more grievous injury.  The addition of Electro can make each individual hit much more damaging, shocking muscles, nerves, and internal organs, bypassing conventional defenses and toughness.

Total XPZ used: 150 xpz.  
Remaining: 14

Character’s Name:– 

Kurenai Khali 

Profile:– 

strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/26743/kurenai-khali-update 

Devil Fruit:– 

N/A 

Current X-Poinz:– 633 (183 unspent)

Rank Up trait

Booming Voice: Between being a half giant in sheer stature, her exceptionally well trained lungs, and some unique vocal chords, Khali can raise her voice to incredibly high volumes. By pressurizing the air in her lungs using her tension training, she can emit shouts capable of shattering glass and damaging eardrums.

[Fennec]

Greetings and Salutations! dazbreaker! I shall be taking care of these today! 

Hm-Hm! I see I see! Well your upgrades for your Zebra lass are APPROVED! So please update her profile accordingly!

Now, as for Khali! I'm afraid "Boom Voice" isn't a trait. It's more of an aspect that you'd add to your FiST as an upgrade. So that one won't do. That said you're welcome to apply for a different trait or apply 'Booming Voice' as an aspect. Also also! If you want to discuss these things or have questions feel free to ask them in site questions on discord. Well! If you do decide to make a change, please @ me here on site so I can look over things again. As always good luck on your journey!