Rise from the Ashes [SUB]

[pepsi]

Thread Title/Link: Rise from the Ashes
Location/Mission Number: Loguetown
Total Post/Word Count: 29
Brief Synopsis:
Deman Reeves, Phoebe von Kessler and Kikori Suto show up at midnight sharp at the docks in order to assault a shipment of slaves guarded by Ensign Rosalyn O. Lovelace. Deman manages to sneak in the ship and free half of them, the other half not being there anymore. Among these slaves there's Idoc Zaitli; Deman and Idoc then bust out the ship and pick a fight with Rosie and Kikori respectively.
Kikori, in the meantime, has been wreaking havoc killing people left and right, and after a quick spar against Rosie, attacks Idoc. Deman and Idoc manage to survive and win after reporting serious injuries; Idoc and the rest of the slaves are then brought to safety by Deman and Phoebe.



Character Name/Link: Rosalyn O. Lovelace
Individual Post Count: 8
X-Poinz at Submission: 358
Notable Feats: Secured half a shipment of slaves; lightly injured Kikori; injured Deman; obtained a nice stuffed toy and a pair of Seastone cuffs.

Character Name/Link: Deman Reeves
Individual Post Count: 8
X-Poinz at Submission: 346
Notable Feats: Freed half a shipment of slaves, in particular Idoc Zaitli; injured Rosie and cuffed her with Seastone cuffs.

Character Name/Link: Idoc Zaitli
Individual Post Count: 6
X-Poinz at Submission: 300
Notable Feats: Fought against Kikori and drove him away.

Character Name/Link: Kikori Suto
Individual Post Count: 7
X-Poinz at Submission: 434
Notable Feats: Killed many people, Marine and slaves alike.


Group Name/Link: Shijin

Participating Members: Deman Reeves, Idoc Zaitli, Phoebe Von Kessler
X-Poinz at Submission: 500

[Phantasma]

Claimed, I guess.

[Phantasma]

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Name and Link: Rosalyn O. Lovelace
User: foximus
Total X-Poinz: 80 [8 Four Blues posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 92 Earned XPZ


92 + 358 [Total XPZ at submission] = 450 New total XPZ

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Name and Link: Kikori Suto
User: kikori
Total X-Poinz: 70 [7 Four Blues posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included rounded up.] = 81 Earned XPZ


81 + 434 [Total XPZ at submission] = 515 New total XPZ

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Name and Link: Idoc Zaitli
User: laskt
Total X-Poinz: 60 [6 Four Blues posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 69 Earned XPZ


69 + 300 [Total XPZ at submission] = 369 New total XPZ

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Name and Link: Deman Reeves
User: cimmerianhydra
Total X-Poinz: 80 [8 Four Blues posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 92 Earned XPZ


92 + 346 [Total XPZ at submission] = 438 New total XPZ

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Group name and Link: Shijin
Member(s): Idoc Zaitli, Deman
Total X-Poinz: 500 [XPZ at submission] + 81 [Idoc Zaitli, Deman. Rounded up] = 581 New total XPZ

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{Click me for notes!}Notes: Notes are available upon request, think of these as like feedback on your writing or my own personal thoughts on the thread.

• Make an update profile for Deman and Idoc Zaitli in the OC update section, linked here. This is so you can add on your XPZ and keep things up to date for later threads. This is especially important for you Pepsi since you have yet to do so and have already completed a thread.
  
• It is imperative that as the person submitting the thread, Pepsi, you double check to ensure you have relevant information. You've linked OC database posts in place of Update Profiles, Graders use those Update Profiles to cross reference and ensure you have relevant XPZ information on there-- it serves to streamline the process. 
• In the same vein as above please state what area of the board these threads occur in. E.g. Four Blues, Grand Line, Calm Belt, New World and so on. 
• NPC's do not contribute to your total Crew XPZ earnings, since you put down Phoebe I am just restating this fact. 

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Enjoy your loot!