Post by Smiley on Mar 3, 2020 18:42:25 GMT -5
Character’s Name:– Bukbuk
Profile:–strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25832/bukbuk-bucket?page=1&scrollTo=108385
Devil Fruit:– N/A
Current X-Poinz:– 335 (635 Total)
New Skill:
Navigator: Though not exactly formerly trained by any instructor, his adventures, experience, avid love of reading and natural racial disposition to it has turned Bucket into an efficient and rather competent navigator, capable of dealing with some of the rougher weather one can find in their adventures.
Grand Explorer: Being a fishman that has traveled far and survived things greater than himself, he picked up basic skills that any traveler would need, like basic first aid, though he specializes in drawing up charts and maps, so that he can guide himself and others through whatever land they pass through.
New Trait:
Grand Stamina
Blessed, from birth, with a level of energy that makes him seem unable to grow tired, Bukbuk is actually capable of making the best with the least energy possible, able to fight and work for much longer than the average human, while using much less energy.
Name:– Fishman Karate
Focus:– Unarmed Combat, Control over water and atmospheric moisture
Rank:– D
New Aspect:– Moisture Control: As the basic of any Fishman Karate practicioner, the Bukbuk has learned how to control the very moisture in the atmosphere, able to use it to various means, from mobility to empowering his attacks.
Name:– Greater Shock Punch
Original:– Hundred Tiles Punch
Rank: – 2
Aspects: Moisture Control
Description:– A more powerful, upgraded version of his hundred tiles punch, Bucket uses his ability to control moisture to add power to his attack, as well as to project it forward as a quick, powerful shockwave projectile.
Name:– Soul Crushing Palm Smash
Original:– Organ Crushing 350 Tile Palm Strike
Rank: – 3
Aspects: Moisture Control
Description:– An upgrade of the O.C. Palm Strike, the S.C. Palm Smash is a vastly upgraded version, using Bukbuk's control over atmospheric moisture to make the impact much greater in power and radius, making it as if the victim was hit by an actual giant's palm.
Name:– True Chop
Fighting Style:– Fishman Karate
Rank:– 1
Description:– A quick, focused and powerful, yet basic chop, usually aimed at weak spots in an adversary. Due to the focused power behind it, it is slightly more powerful than his True Punch.
(The two following techs already exist, this is just a request to change their name and fix the description accordingly.)
True Punch
Previous: Hundred Tiles Punch
Rank 1
By performing a punch with the natural power of a Fishman, the user is able to strike an opponent with such destructive force that most are launched away.
Organ Crushing Palm Strike
Previous: Organ Crushing 350 Tile Palm Strike
Rank 2
By throwing out a terribly violent, aimed palm strike at any of the opponent's organs, the user is able to greatly damage the area it hits. Due to the way it is performed, a successful strike usually leaves the are very prominently marked and bruised.
Costs:
Grand Stamina: Free 600 Xpz Trait
Fighting Style upgrade: 200
SCPS: Upgrade, 100 Xpz
Greater Shock Punch: Upgrade, 75 Xpz -Rebate
True Chop: New, 50 XPz - Rebate
Total: 425.
Remaining: 125 (FiST Rebate) - 425 + 335 = 35 Xpz Remaining
(Edits: Fixed the naming on some techs, requested changes for others, fixed some grammar)
Profile:–strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25832/bukbuk-bucket?page=1&scrollTo=108385
Devil Fruit:– N/A
Current X-Poinz:– 335 (635 Total)
New Skill:
Navigator: Though not exactly formerly trained by any instructor, his adventures, experience, avid love of reading and natural racial disposition to it has turned Bucket into an efficient and rather competent navigator, capable of dealing with some of the rougher weather one can find in their adventures.
Grand Explorer: Being a fishman that has traveled far and survived things greater than himself, he picked up basic skills that any traveler would need, like basic first aid, though he specializes in drawing up charts and maps, so that he can guide himself and others through whatever land they pass through.
New Trait:
Grand Stamina
Blessed, from birth, with a level of energy that makes him seem unable to grow tired, Bukbuk is actually capable of making the best with the least energy possible, able to fight and work for much longer than the average human, while using much less energy.
Name:– Fishman Karate
Focus:– Unarmed Combat, Control over water and atmospheric moisture
Rank:– D
New Aspect:– Moisture Control: As the basic of any Fishman Karate practicioner, the Bukbuk has learned how to control the very moisture in the atmosphere, able to use it to various means, from mobility to empowering his attacks.
Name:– Greater Shock Punch
Original:– Hundred Tiles Punch
Rank: – 2
Aspects: Moisture Control
Description:– A more powerful, upgraded version of his hundred tiles punch, Bucket uses his ability to control moisture to add power to his attack, as well as to project it forward as a quick, powerful shockwave projectile.
Name:– Soul Crushing Palm Smash
Original:– Organ Crushing 350 Tile Palm Strike
Rank: – 3
Aspects: Moisture Control
Description:– An upgrade of the O.C. Palm Strike, the S.C. Palm Smash is a vastly upgraded version, using Bukbuk's control over atmospheric moisture to make the impact much greater in power and radius, making it as if the victim was hit by an actual giant's palm.
Name:– True Chop
Fighting Style:– Fishman Karate
Rank:– 1
Description:– A quick, focused and powerful, yet basic chop, usually aimed at weak spots in an adversary. Due to the focused power behind it, it is slightly more powerful than his True Punch.
(The two following techs already exist, this is just a request to change their name and fix the description accordingly.)
True Punch
Previous: Hundred Tiles Punch
Rank 1
By performing a punch with the natural power of a Fishman, the user is able to strike an opponent with such destructive force that most are launched away.
Organ Crushing Palm Strike
Previous: Organ Crushing 350 Tile Palm Strike
Rank 2
By throwing out a terribly violent, aimed palm strike at any of the opponent's organs, the user is able to greatly damage the area it hits. Due to the way it is performed, a successful strike usually leaves the are very prominently marked and bruised.
Costs:
Grand Stamina: Free 600 Xpz Trait
Fighting Style upgrade: 200
SCPS: Upgrade, 100 Xpz
Greater Shock Punch: Upgrade, 75 Xpz -Rebate
True Chop: New, 50 XPz - Rebate
Total: 425.
Remaining: 125 (FiST Rebate) - 425 + 335 = 35 Xpz Remaining
(Edits: Fixed the naming on some techs, requested changes for others, fixed some grammar)
