Myles' V-Tech

[Fennec]

Character’s Name:– Myles Suzuki
Profile:– link
Devil Fruit:– Suru Suru no Mi
Current X-Poinz:– 645

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New Trait

Inhuman Dexterity 
D - Class
Through intense training and accumulated martial experience awakened inhumanly fast reflexes. Thanks to it, he can easily seize initiative as he can react much faster than regular person, even in confusing situations or when surprised.

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Improving Fighting Style

Name:– Guts and Glory
Focus:– Martial Arts, Power Blows, Suru Suru no Mi
Former Rank:– E
Current Rank:– D (Cost: 200 xpz) (125 rebait)
Description:– A fighting style based around the use of the Suro Suro no Mi. The fighting style mostly uses punches but the occasional kick isn't out of the question.
Aspect Unlocked:
Defibrillator 
By rubbing at high speeds with hands covered in Suru powder Myles is able to generate static electricity! 

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Techs

Name:– Spark Plug
Fighting Style:– Guts and Glory
Rank:– 2
Description:– Myles uses defibrillator on his hands by rubbing them super fast creating static electricity on them! He then strikes his opponent with an open palm releasing a burst of electric energy. 
Cost:-- 125 xpz (125 xpz from rebait)

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Costs and Totals

Trait: Free
Aspect/Upgrade: 200 xpz
Spark Plug: 125 xpz (rebait xpz used)


Total X-Poinz used: - 325
Total X-Poinz left: - 170 xpz

[Suriko]

Okay, so the issue here. unfortunately, is that the description for how you're fruit's power works, this new aspect seems to completely contradict how this chalk powder works. And well it kind of slips into a canon fruit ability in Alvida's fruit. I can double-check with the rest of the staff but it seems like something that might not work as an aspect.

[Fennec]

Changed things up going for an elemental aspect instead. 

[Suriko]

That looks good.

Approved

[Fennec]

INFO

Character’s Name: Myles Suzuki
Profile: link
Devil Fruit: Suru Suru no Mi
Current X-Poinz: 959

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NEW FiST

Name:– Η Σφαγή || I Sfagí ["The Culling" in Greek]
Focus:– Scythe, Kusarigama, Power Attacks
Class:– D
Description:-- A fighting style developed by Myles optimized for Scythe usage. Scythes tend to be unwieldy and uncomfortable at best for weapon usage. However, with his inhuman dexterity and monstrous strength, Myles has made it an effective weapon. Powerful strikes, grappling blows, and flying-slashes are just a handful of things he is capable of accomplishing.
Aspect:–

• Σκοτεινή Συγκομιδή ||Skoteiní Synkomidí (Dark Harvest in Greek)

By striking the air with the Scyth's blade Myles is able of creating compressed slashes to make his typical close-quarter weapon longer ranged. Be it a crescent-shaped slash or piercing vacuum. [200 xpz]

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TECHS

Name:– Μεταμόρφωση || Metamórfosi ["Metamorph" in Greek]
Fighting Style:– Η Σφαγή || I Sfagí
Rank:– 0
Description:– A named technique where Myles shifts his weapon between its two forms. The Kusarigama and Scythe! (0 xpz)

Name:– Επιβλαβής || Epivlavís ["Noxious" in Greek]
Fighting Style:– Η Σφαγή || I Sfagí
Rank:– 2
Description:– A simple crescent-shaped flying slash done in either scythe or kusarigama mode that Myles does by storking the air with grace and power. (125 xpz)

Name:– Μίασμα || Míasma ["Miasma" in Greek]
Fighting Style:– Η Σφαγή || I Sfagí
Rank:– 3
Description:– An improved version of Noxious, done in either scythe or kusarigama mode. Myles starts out by electrifying his arms and pushing the electricity into the conductive metal with his Devil Fruit followed. He then lash at the air with great force releasing a tornado-like slash of electrical energy at the enemy. (225 xpz +100 xpz) 

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X-Poinz Calculations

X-Poinz Spent:
-200 Aspect

Rebate X-poinz:
+125 xpz from aspect
+125 xpz from weapon

Rebate Used:
-125 xpz (On Rank 2 tech)
-100 xpz (On Rank 3 Tech Upgrade)

[Jade]

Alright, let's get down to business, shall we? First and foremost, make sure you add in those profile and Devil Fruit links! Second, take care with your terminology here - Techniques use Rank, FiSts use Class. (Insert "swag vs class" meme here, and now I have to go wash my hands with bleach for typing that.)

Anyway, moving on down to the Techniques being applied for here... You actually don't have enough XPz to cover your costs. See, after buying that weapon just now, you're down to 234 XPz free to spend - 16 shy of the 250 you need today. I'll let you figure out how you want to handle this, so just respond to this thread once you have.

[Fennec]

Ok! So, I applied the appropriate links. I then fixed the rank and class issue! The FiST is being purchased at D-Class. Finally, I removed Reap and Sow as well as Grasp! Instead got a normal flying slash called Noxious and used the remaining xpz to make the rank 3 variant "Miasma"! 

[Jade]

Can't say I have any further issues with what you've presented... Is what I would say if I hadn't just noticed that your Rebate XPz is actually off. You've got 125 Rebate XPz from your new weapon, not 150. Nothing that will stop you from making this purchase, but please redo your math accordingly - the 25 XPz difference shouldn't break the bank, but I also wouldn't blame you if it makes you reconsider your purchases.

Sorry about this one - once again, the screw-up is on me for not having caught this the first time.

[Fennec]

Fix has been made! I am keeping my purchases as they are

[Jade]

Sounds good to me! I can finally give this the stamp of approval. Go ahead and update Myles' profile accordingly!