Andromeda and Octavia Requests

[Blitzfrieg]

Character’s Name: Octavia Barbary
Profile: strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/24928/octavia-barbary
Devil Fruit: None
Current X-Poinz: 599 (399 available)


New Style

Name:– Kraken Fist
Focus:– Rapid mid range strikes, Water Manipulation
Class:– E
Description:– A form of Fishman Karate modified for her use taking advantage of her additional limbs as her primary striking weapons. Octavia focuses on a defensive style, utilizing rapid, mid range strikes with her tentacles, manipulating the water inside and around her target to cause additional damage, while reserving her hands for wielding her sword, Gurume.


New Techniques

Name:– Devouring Carve
Fighting Style:– Hunting Feast
Rank:– 1 50 XPz
Description:– Octavia raises her blade for a powerful slash with her blade, gripping it with both her hand and two additional tentacles. This makes the slash faster and more powerful than she could normally manage.

Name:– Uchimizu
Fighting Style:– Kraken Fist
Rank:– 2 125 xpz
Description:– Octavia uses a handful of water, throwing it with such speed and precision that the water droplets hit with the force of a bullet.

Name:– One Hundred Tile Kraken Shock “Hyakumaigawara Seiken“
Fighting Style:– Kraken Fist
Rank:– 1 50 xpz
Description:– The Octopus Merfolk equivalent of the Hundred Brick Fist, Octavia coils up a tentacle like a spring and launches an immensely powerful ‘punch’ able to deliver a massive impact.

Improved Techniques

Name:– Grand Fillet
Original:– Fillet
Rank:– 2 50+75(125 total)
Description:– Since Octavia added Hooks to the rest of her Tentacles, she has trained to perform Fillet wtih all eight limbs instead of three. This takes a lot of stamina to perform, but allows her to overwhelm an opponent, or even engage groups of enemies with a hurricane of rapid slashes at short to medium range in all directions.

Name:– Octagonal True Tile Kraken Shock “Yatsuomoto Shin No Tairu Takoken”
Original:— One Hundred Tile Kraken Shock
Rank:– 2 50+75 xpz (125 xpz total)
Description:– Octavia must perform this technique from a position where she can effectively use all her tentacles to strike. Curling up her limbs tightly, she performs a simultaneous One Hundred Tile Kraken Shock with each individual tentacle. The result is a strike possessing eight times the force of her normal Hyakumaigawara Seiken.

Total Cost 425 xpz



Character’s Name: Andromeda
Profile: strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25262/andromeda-update
Devil Fruit: None
Current X-Poinz: 657 (132 available)


Rank Up Trait - Inhuman Speed: Andromeda has mastered the use of her HITMAN system and athleticism to achieve movement speeds that go beyond natural human abilities.

Name:– Blitz Thruster
Fighting Style:– Buster Arts
Rank:– 1 (50 xpz)
Description:– Andromeda jumps up and performs a missle drop kick with both legs. With her Inhuman Strength this technique can smash through walls or send opponents flying. Can be performed from a sprint to increase the force even further.

Name:– Blitz Torpedo
Original:— Blitz Thruster
Rank:– 2 (50 + 75 xpz)
Description:– Andromeda performs a Blitz Thruster magnified by pressurizing steam into her legs via her HITMAN System. This magnifies the force of the attack many times over, and releases a burst of heated steam on impact.

Total Cost 125 xpz

[Jade]

Octavia's New FiSt and Techniques

[/b]. Upgraded variant techniques only cost you the difference in rank, so Grand Fillet and Yatsuomoto Shin no Tairu Takoken, although they theoretically have a total cost of 125 XPz, 50 of that comes from their Rank 1 base techniques. The Rank 2 variants each only cost 75 XPz.

Given that I managed to figure all that out, I'll approve this stuff this time, but please attempt to keep this information in mind for the future.[/ul]
Andromeda's New Trait and Techniques

Side note, but you shouldn't make individual threads for each and every new request you want to make in this board. Whether you make one per character, or make one that encompasses your entire roster, doesn't matter to me, but making a new one for each request clogs up the board.[/font][/blockquote]

[Blitzfrieg]

Character’s Name: Octavia Barbary

Profile: strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25751/octavia-barbary-update

Devil Fruit: None

Current X-Poinz: 824 (249 available)

D Class Rank Up Trait - Potent Venom: Octavia's natural Octopi venom are stronger than average for her species.  While not lethal, subjection to her Ink or bite can result in mild disorientation, and fatigue.


Improved Fighting Styles 


Name:–
Kraken Fist -200xpz
Focus:–
Rapid Mid Range Strikes, Water Manipulation
Rank:–
D
New Aspect:– Water Shock: Octavia can now vibrate water through her attacks.  She can unleash shockwaves through the water in her targets body, bypassing conventional defenses and damaging the tissue/organs from within.

Rebate +125 xpz + 49 remaining XPz

Improved Techniques

Name:– Tenderizer
Original:– Fillet
Rank:– 2 -75
Description:–  Octavia can still use her tentacles to fight even when they are unarmed, and has applied her Water Shock Aspect to their use.  This technique uses extremely fast whipstrike attacks with her tentacles that don't strike nearly as hard as her normal ones at first, but instead trigger shockwaves of vibration through the water in her targets body, bypassing conventional defenses.  The more strikes she lands in rapid succession, the more damaging the vibration becomes.

Name:– Zerotairu Takoken
Original:– Hyakumaigawara Takoken
Rank:– 2 -75
Description:– Octavia uses an upgraded version of her One Hundred Tile Kraken Shock technique applying her Water Shock aspect.  While this Zero Tile Kraken Shock does not technically apply direct force, it causes a violent shockwave to ripple through the water in the target's body.  This shockwave is far more destructive than the full force of her original technique, but due to the nature of the technique only works on targets with water inside.

Remaining XPz: 24

[Vio]

<sup>Hi, Blitzfrieg!

So, let’s get down to it. Unfortunately, the “Potent Venom” Trait is beyond what a Trait should really allow.

As for the “Kraken Fist — Water Manipulation” Aspect, this has the same issue. I know it might seem like all these things belong to a single Aspect, but in reality the peak of Fishman Karate-like styles is a combination of Aspects! So, you’re going to have to decide from one or the other, really. You can either take the “Waterbending” route for this, or the more direct “Shockwaves” through water. I’ll also express this now, to save further confusion. The shockwaves trick wouldn’t work through the moisture in the air without yet another Aspect on top of it!

I’m sure you know the drill by now!</sup>

[Blitzfrieg]

Adjustments made.  Satisfactory?

[Vio]

^{That looks much better! Consider these ones Approved!}