Toulon's Technique Requests

[viruswithshoes]

Name:Flying Arc Slash
Original: Flying Slash
Rank: 3
Description: In addition to the power of the a normal flying slash an electrical element is added giving it more destructive power.
Cost: 100 XPZ Paid from bonus for upgrading Kuchisake.

[Jade]

Everything seems to be in order here, so it's an easy approval to give. However, in the future, please do be sure to provide a link to the character's profile!

(Also, just to note, you still have another 75 Rebate XPz you can spend from upgrading Kuchisake.)

[viruswithshoes]

Character’s Name:Toulon

Name: Mister Punch

Original: Mister Punch

Rank: 1 moving to 2

Description: A simple punch or chain of punches capable of knocking down people of slightly above average strength.

Cost: 75 XPZ from previous upgrade of Toulon's puppet Kuchisake.

[Jade]

Alrighty, two things - first and foremost, Rebate XPz can only be spent on things that utilize the source of the Rebate XPz, and near as a I can tell, "Mister Punch" doesn't actually involve using Kuchisake at all.

Secondly, with the move to a new system, we no longer have the concept of purely upgrading techniques. You can make a higher Rank and purely "stronger" version of Mister Punch that utilizes an Aspect or is just in some other way worthy of being a Rank higher, but there is not a way to take a Rank 1 technique and turn it into a Rank 2 technique.

For these reasons, I'm afraid I'm not able to accept this technique as things stand.

[viruswithshoes]

Character’s Name: Toulon Kuroko
Profile: Here
Devil Fruit: N/A
Current X-Poinz: 215

Name: Adrenom
Fighting Style: Bunraku
Rank: 2
Description: Injects a solution into a person's bloodstream, via the puppet Glycon, increasing adrenal output giving temporary strength. There is an aftereffect of extreme fatigue afterward.
Cost: 125 XPZ (75 Rebate)

[Fennec]

Hey viruswithshoes, I'll be handling this one for today!
Hm-Hm! I see, the aspect in of itself is fine! It's a very cool concept using pressure points to buff or debuff. That said the technique won't work. Healing is hard to replicate mid battle without weird Devil Fruit shenanigans. So that won't fly sadly, please @ me on site once you make the appropriate changes. You're also more than welcome to discuss this topic more in depth in the discord server's brainstorming channel. Best wishes! Sammo!

[viruswithshoes]

Changed FiST into Technique.

[Fennec]

viruswithshoes, ok so this is better! However, you're going to need to pick one of the two. Either stamina or strength. Not both. When you've made the change please @ me on site. Thank you! ^^

[viruswithshoes]

Changes made. Went with strength.

[Fennec]

Consider it APPROVED!
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