Updates for Francis

[momo]

Character’s Name:– Francis Sommer
Profile:– link
Current X-Poinz:– 713 

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Fighting Style Update

Name:– Niten Ichi-ryū (二天一流) or "the school of the strategy of two heavens as one"

Focus:– Swordsmanship, Long Sword, Short Sword

Rank:– D (200 X-Poinz)

New Aspect:– Kīn'aido (キーンアイド): Named after the japanese word for keen eyed, Kīn'aido is rooted in the root principles of Niten Ichi-ryū: he smallest of things matter just as much as the biggest of things; the man who knows nothing knows everything. Francis' technique has notably become more on point and less brutish in manner, allowing for him to create a cutting force with his swords.   

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Techniques Upgrade 

Name:– Ko Denryoku-hō (小電力法)
Original:– This attack is done with only a short sword. It is a quick series of moves that are primarily used defensively, but, ideally, aims to gain a cut at the chest (the middle).
Rank:– 2 (75 X-Poinz)
Description:– Ko Denryoku-hō is a single sword technique that relies only on a short sword. In its original form, one creates a quick series of moves to cut at the chest (the middle). Its use is for defense, but its form allows for it to be adapted for offense. With the aspect of Kīn'aido and a further understanding of how it may be used in an offensive form, Francis is capable of creating a cutting force with a quick series of moves that produce several injuries to one's midsection.

[Suriko]

I just want to be clear. are you meaning flying slash when you say cutting force.

[momo]

Yes, I do.

[Suriko]

Alright seems pretty standard then

Approved

[momo]

Character’s Name:– Francis Sommer
Profile:– link
Current X-Poinz:– 1681 

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Fighting Style Update

Name:– Niten Ichi-ryū (二天一流) or "the school of the strategy of two heavens as one"

Focus:– Swordsmanship, Long Sword, Short Sword

Rank:– C (350 X-Poinz)

New Aspect:– Hōchō (包丁): Named after the japanese word for cleaver, Hōchō is likely better known to others as the principle of offering powerful attacks, so much so that one may be able to cut through metals. Hōchō, unlike other forms, relies less upon brutish attacks and more precise ones.

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Techniques To Add 

Name:– Uke Nagashi (受流)
Fighting Style:– Swordsmanship, Short Sword/Wakizashi
Rank:–  1 (50 X-Poinz)
Description:– Uke Nagashi is a simple attack rooted in Niten Ichi-ryū's basics. Involving a short sword, Francis rushes at the enemy, aiming for a horizontal upper cut. It is typically aimed near the neck.

Name:– Hi to ishi no katto (火と石のカット)
Fighting Style:– Swordsmanship, Two Sword-Style, Precise Cut
Rank:– 2 (125 X-Poinz-125 Rebate X-Poinz = 0 X-Poinz)
Description:– Otherwise known as the Fire and Stone's Cut, Hi to ishi no katto is based upon one of the most basic principles of Niten Ichi-ryū. Aimed to be used when one's swords clashes with others, this technique allows one to cut as strongly as possible. When coupled with the aspect of Hōchō, Francis is capable of cutting through even metal. Against an opponent, these cuts are typically aimed to hit the opponents hands, legs, and body.

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Add Traits

Inhuman Agility - 0 X-Poinz

[Vio]

<sup>Hey, momo!

Sorry for the wait on this one!

All generally looks good with this, though I’d like some clarification on a couple of things just to make sure you better understand the system.

First of all, are you aware of the Rebate X-Poinz system and how it links to Fighting Styles and Aspects? If not, you can find information on this in the Dojo thread. A brief summary is; it’s essentially “free” points you get for purchasing upgrades. You get 125 Rebate for your Fighting Style every time you upgrade it and gain a new Aspect. You can use this on Techniques, rather than dipping into your total X-Poinz. If you want to make use of it, please specify in your application which source you’re taking from.

The other thing is, Traits. Now you’ve passed the C Class threshold, you’re eligible to apply for an additional Trait. You actually can gain two, as it seems you never used the slot you gain at D Class, either. These don’t cost anything, you just need to apply for them here!

Let me know what you’re doing and if there’s anything you wish to add.</sup>

[momo]

Made some small edits; hopefully everything is still good! I'd only like to add one trait (in the form of inhuman agility). I'd also like to use the rebate towards the second technique.

Vio

[Vio]

<sup>Hi, momo!

That’s absolutely fine if that’s all you want to add.

Please update your profile!</sup>