Jara Jara no mi

[shenta]

Devil fruit romanji name: Jara Jara no mi

English name: chain chain fruit

Classification: Peramecia

Owned by: Mugen Alexander

Appearance: the Jara Jara fruit resembles a melon with black spirals. The melon is a dark blue but cut it open and it has a silver lining. It has a sweet taste at first like jelly but then turns to a taste that was like coffee grounds mixed with bad grapes. The melon has a tough out side but a smooth inside.

Ability: once consumed the person becomes a chain human which allows the person to produce chain from there body. The chains granted by the fruit can be used as powerful blunt weapons, should the user be able to wield them effectively. The chains can also be used as a sort of armor for self-defense. Mugen uses this fruit in combat, attacking people in a variety of ways. He also uses it to chain people up and capture them, and can crush them with the chains. His chains can also come in alternative forms, such as accessories like necklaces, sashes, and collars, which he use to make people do what he wants by tightening them. The chains can also have different kinds of ends, such as large claw-anchors to latch onto things or weights increase the power of their strikes. Mugen can change the metal or material the chains are made of after farther training to boot his offense and defense property.

Strength: The user is also capable of tying things up with the chains, and tightening the chains telekinetically (the chains he does this with glow red). The ends of the chains can be made sharp, allowing the user to stab opponents and latch onto faraway surfaces. The user can make the chains various sizes from being the size of a average chains to being large enough to act like a bridge.

Weaknesses: Although the chains are strong, they can be broken with sufficient force. Otherwise, the user is affected by the standard Devil Fruit weaknesses

Sea prison stone.

The sea.

If enough heat is used it can melt his chains.  

[Suriko]

Well, to begin with, it'd be nice if you could please use the template given here as it gives a bit more organization to the fruit.

Moving on, I'm not asking for too much more, but it'd be nice to see a bit more detail in the description of the fruit like of the texture. the size. Most devil fruits are hardly just the same as their counterpart fruit with swirls on them.

So on the ability of the fruit. This section is typical where you go into detail about the powers the fruit grants and the specifics of that. while going over how the user may use this ability, that is something typically covered by fighting styles or techniques. Here, we want more the specifics of the fruit power itself. Like what it does. If it produces something, how does it produce them? What are they made of? How can this fruit be improved upon with either training or growth? What can of metals is it able to create. or in an example more specific to this fruit. Where can the chains be produced? is there a limit to how much can be made? like with most paramecia of this type, do the chains have any special properties compared to regular chains? Stuff like that.

And now to bring up some issues on some of the examples you gave. With most production paramecia, they typically can do three things for certain. Produce the item. change the size, and manipulate what they produce. They don't really have a lot of fine control like making it into accessories other than making them the size of those. At least not at it's base. To that end, you wouldn't be able to make a chain with a pointed end or even a weight as that would fall more under metal shaping. That doesn't mean Mugen couldn't attach these accessories to his chains, but he just would not be able to make them as part of them.

As to the telekinesis, that really isn't necessary as most canon examples we've seen of similar fruits have had that kind of control over their creation as long as they were in contact with it. or near it.

Weakness are fairly straightforward and fine for the most part, though I may get a second opinion on that.