Raku Raku no Mi

[imoofan]

Raku Raku no Mi

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English Name:– Raccoon Raccoon Fruit

Classification:– Zoan

Owned By:– Denda 

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Appearance:– A dark gray kiwi with black and white swirls. It tasted like rotten apples and ketchup.

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Ability:– The Raku Raku no Mi is a Zoan Devil Fruit that turns the one who ingests it into a Raccoon-Man, granting the user the ability to transform into full and hybrid beast forms.

Full Beast Form

    In Full Beast form Denda transforms into a Raccoon, growing to about 30 inches from head to the tip of the tail. Dark gray fur covers most of his body except for the white and black fur forming the trademark "mask" around his eyes and the rings around his 10 inch tail. His "mask" looks vaguely like his aviator goggles. While in this form Denda gains increased hearing and smelling, his vision in the dark in enhanced and his front paws have increased sensitivity allowing him to feel some vibrations in the ground.

Hybrid Beast Form

    In this form Denda grows 5 inches larger, his tail elongates into a more raccoon like tail, and he grows claws on his hands and feet allowing him to climb objects much easier. Dark gray fur also grows in patches on his body with a tiny amount of black fur growing around his eyes. His hands become more sensitive to tactile feedback like his raccoon form but they are not as sensitive.



Weaknesses:– 

• Sea stone/water
• Intense smells or loud noises are disorienting
• increased hand/front paw sensitivity can be overwhelmed.

[Jade]

Hey there, imoofan! For a first attempt at making a Fruit here, this is looking pretty good. In fact, there's really no major issues, just something I'd like to make sure you're aware of - when transforming, clothes typically transform alongside the user, morphing to fit their new proportions. The only case I can think of where this isn't, well, the case is when a Zoan form is utterly incapable of wearing the clothing, such as with the Boa sisters' hybrid forms.

This really isn't a major issue, I just wanted to make sure you were aware of this, as you mentioned Denda's Full Beast form's "mask" looks like his aviator goggles. This isn't something you need to remove - it's a neat little detail - but I do want to make sure you don't think that his goggles would be morphing into his body.

Other than that little detail... You could probably stand to read over this again to fix up some grammatical and spelling errors, maybe throw a period on the end of the Appearance section... Actually, if you want to take a moment to describe what the Fruit looked or tasted like before being eaten, that might be nice, but again, not actually a major issue. Anyway, let me know when or if you make any of these little changes and that you understand that point about Zoan transformations and how they interact with the user's clothing, and you should be good to go!

[imoofan]

    It's probably so well done because I got got some pointers from Flame when I posted this brainstorming lol. 

    I have fixed all the errors that i could find and I do know clothes don't merge with my body when i transform. That was just a little flavor I added. and i added a taste to the fruit. Not much but I made it very gross. XD

    Hopefully it's all good now! ^.^

[Jade]

I could nitpick about how Devil Fruits typically taste like, well, some sort of horrible poison, it doesn't seem worth it given that that note is mainly for flavor (*badumtsh*) and, well, there's no accounting for taste!

So, since there's really nothing else that needs adjusted... I proclaim it accepted and good to go!