Nebyu Nebyu no Mi

[Helix]

Nebyu Nebyu no Mi

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English Name:– Nebu Nebu Fruit ("Nebyu" comes from the word "Nebyura," a Japanese term for "Nebula")
Classification:– Paramecia
Owned By:– Ambrosia

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Appearance:– This Devil Fruit resembles a Hala fruit; such fruit has been likened to a planet in its appearance in that, when split in half, it has a few layers of coloring from the surface to the core. The fruit itself has multiple long, fibrous phalanges packed together and shooting out from its tough, inedible core. These phalanges are the edible bit of the fruit, the tops of which are polygonal in shape. The Nebyu Nebyu no Mi in particular has the signature Devil Fruit spirals on these angular tops, as well as on the inner, fibrous part of the phalanges. Unlike the normal Hala fruit, this Devil Fruit looks more like a galaxy than planet, with midnight blue tops, a violet-to-pink gradient lining the long, edible, interior parts, and a white core.

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Ability:– Turns the user into a Nebula Human (星雲人間 Seiun Ningen), capable of producing a nebula cloud and assembling small caricatures of certain celestial bodies (such as planets and stars) from this "space dust." Specifically, the abilities of this fruit are as follows:

• Nebulous Gas Cloud Generation
  The base ability of this fruit is the production and manipulation of an assortment of gases and particles from the user's skin that mimic nebulae, the birthplace of stars and planets. The sparkling pink and purple cloud that results can expand to a sphere with a diameter up to around 30' (~9 m). On its own, this gas cloud can't do too much; it can cause coughing fits if breathed in by someone with a weaker constitution, and though it is extremely flammable, the fact that the cloud will quickly dissipate without contact from the user makes this trait more of a liability in most cases. This celestial cloud is also hyper-reactive within itself, and naturally begins to form clumps of rock when left to its own devices.
• Celestial Body Creation
  The true value of this fruit comes from its ability to form various, almost cartoonish versions of celestial bodies out of the gases and dust it has produced. This is done by having the user concentrate on swirling and condensing the cloud's materials into a singular point, with various differences in this process resulting in a variety of possible creations. Said creations mimic the structure and properties of the real things, though at a far smaller and milder scale, being more of a caricature of the object than an exact replica. With their FiSt at E Class, the user can only create relatively simple celestial bodies, such as asteroids or planets, though with more and more experience the Nebula Human will be able to form more complex objects, such as comets and stars. Similarly, the user's experience with the fruit and the complexity of the body being assembled will affect how quickly said bodies can be formed. In order to be actively controlled, any celestial bodies formed must be within the Nebula produced by the user, although they retain any momentum they have even if thrown out of the cloud.
• Celestial Body Deconstruction
  If one of her celestial caricatures is within her nebula cloud, she can deconstruct it (or simply parts of it) very rapidly, since tearing apart these constructs is far simpler than assembling them.
• Particulate Resistance
  The user of this fruit can breathe easily within her own cloud of spacedust, and is likewise unaffected by other particulates in the air, such as dust or smoke. Certain potent, weaponized particulates can be resisted as well, to a degree.
  

Weaknesses:–

• The cloud that the user produces is extremely flammable, due to being mostly hydrogen, and outside sources of intense heat and flame can cause it to combust and explode. Since the user must be in contact with the cloud to manipulate it, this can obviously be rather detrimental to their health. If detonated, the cloud dissipates, requiring the user to reproduce the cloud before controlling any of their celestial bodies.
• If the user's concentration is broken in the midst of forming a particularly complex celestial body, such as a planet, said body goes on to instead form a small asteroid (read: a simple clump of rock), which tends to be much less useful.
• Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses, such as standing water and seastone, apply to this fruit as well.

[Jade]

Hey there, Helix! This is a pretty fun-looking Fruit, and shockingly well-balanced for the theme you went for. Great job on that front! However, there's something that you're going to need to do before we can get this Fruit approved.

It's actually a relatively simple thing, but could you make Ambrosia's name a link to the character's (new) profile?

Now, I will say that the user losing their concentration causing celestial bodies they are building to disintegrate is kind of strange? I could see it as the celestial body sort of getting away from them and developing in an unintended way, or perhaps breaking apart, but it does seem strange that it breaks totally apart. Especially since you mentioned in the Nebulous Gas Cloud Generation section that the nebula naturally starts to form rock clumps on its own when left to "its own devices". But this is more a suggestion from me than something you actually need to change, so! Do with this suggestion what you will.

Get back to me when you make the requested change, if you would!

[Helix]

Oooh, I definitely agree with that, nice catch! Guess I was so focused on making it a weakness I didn't see its inconsistency with the fruit's logic. I changed it so that when complex constructions are interrupted, they end up simply assembling into the lowly asteroid, if that sounds good to you?

Also added Ambrosia's linky~

[Jade]

Alrighty! With that, this Fruit is looking good to go! Have fun with it, Helix!