Adrian Idol's Techniques

[York]

Character Name & Profile Link: Adrian Idol

Class & Exp: D (156/500)

Techniques Requested:
#6 #7 #8

Missile Dropkick: From an elevated position, Idol jumps and brings his knees to his chest before kicking forward, striking the opponent with both soles of his feet.

Rolling Elbow: While standing or running, Idol spins a full 360° and strikes the opponent with his forearm and elbow.

Idol Assassin: A high speed roundhouse kick to the back of the head of a kneeling or seated opponent.

Tech Variations Requested:
 
Original: Idol Killer: A jumping knee strike. This move can be done from a standing or running position.

Variation: Go To Sleep: Idol drapes an opponent over his shoulders in a fireman's carry position, then drops them in front of him and strikes their faces with his knee on their way down. Idol’s maximum lifting capability at his current class is 300 lbs.

Total Cost: No Cost

[Deleted]

Everything looks good. There's just one thing I want to discuss.

You don't have to make Go To Sleep a 2-post move on OCs. Simply let your partners know that there's a chance for their character to counter Adrian's technique should the situation ever arise. You can remove the whole sentence it's in as it's already rule of thumb that any character - NPC or otherwise - under your control is subject to whatever you put them through. Any character controlled by someone else, even a NPC, wouldn't be affected immediately since it'd take your partner's input and consent.

Once that's done, post below and I'll be back.

[York]

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[Deleted]

Transaction Approved!

You may add your techniques to Adrian's app whenever you feel.

[York]

Character Name & Profile Link: Adrian Idol
Class & Exp: D Class, 160 Exp
Tech Deletions Requested: Get a load of this (Tech #1)
Total Cost: 1000 beri

[York]

Character Name: Adrian Idol
Current xPz: 110

REQUESTED TECHNIQUES

Name: Penalty Kick

Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling: Brawler Type
Rank: 1 (50 xPz)
Description: Idol kicks a sitting or kneeling opponent in the back, chest, or face as hard as he can.

Total Cost: 50 xPz

[viruswithshoes]

Looks good to me, Yorkie.

APPROVED

[York]

Character’s Name: Adrian Idol
Profile: Link

Current X-Poinz: 702

Due to a number of issues surrounding Adrian Idol's original FiSTs, I am applying for a single new FiST aiming to combine them into a single, more streamlined experience

Fighting Style:

Name: Professional Wrestling
Focus: Exuberant Grapples and strikes
Class: D

Description:

The fundamentals of professional wrestling. Learning the basics, such as how to fall properly, how to apply a variety of holds to people of any size, and how to lift someone without throwing your back out. Additionally, it adopts a number of techniques from a variety of martial arts. However, none of the adopted attacks are as effective or strong as their root techniques.

The style relies more on flash than substance, as professional wrestling is primarily used to garner a reaction from a crowd, either positive or negative. The greater the audience watching a practitioner, the greater the motivation they have to perform better, hit harder, and push oneself further than before.

New Aspect:

Name: Powerful Strikes
Description: Having to rely more on strikes over the years, Idol has learned how to make certain striking attacks hit harder. By twisting certain parts of his body, performing certain movements to gain momentum, or targeting specific points on an opponent, Idol can deliver brutal strikes despite his smaller stature.

Cost: 200

Rebate: 125

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New Trait:

Strong Back (600 X-Poinz Trait): Through training and hardships, Idol has gained the strength needed to lift larger, and heavier foes for his attacks without falling over. While it doesn't increase the power of his attacks, it only allows him to deliver his lifting attacks on adversaries he normally wouldn't be able to.

Cost: Free

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Techniques:

Name: Idol Driver
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: Idol leaps at his opponent and quickly tucks their head under his armpit, then shifts his weight, slaps the opponent on the back, and falls backwards, driving their head to the ground.
Cost: 50

Name: Idol Killer
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: Idol delivers a jumping knee strike to the opponent. This move can be done from a standing or running position.
Cost: 50

Name: Idol Kick
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: A thrusting side kick to the opponent. Idol considers this to be his signature move.
Cost: 50

Name: Idol Crusher
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: A jumping double foot stomp to a downed opponent.
Cost: 50

Name: Missile Dropkick
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: From an elevated position, Idol jumps and brings his knees to his chest before kicking forward, striking the opponent with both soles of his feet.
Cost: 50

Name: Rolling Elbow
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: While standing or running, Idol spins up to a full 360° and strikes the opponent with his forearm and elbow.
Cost: 50

Name: Idol Assassin
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description: A high speed roundhouse kick to the back of the head of an opponent.
Cost: 50

Name: Penalty Kick
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Description:  Idol kicks a sitting or kneeling opponent in the back, chest, or face as hard as he can.
Cost: 50

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New Techniques:

Name: Idol-plex

Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling

Rank: 1

Description: Adopted from his father. From behind an opponent, Idol puts his head under their arm and wraps his arms around their waist. He then lifts the opponent upwards as he falls backwards, causing them to fall on their neck and shoulders.

Cost: 50

Name: Fisherman Suplex

Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling

Rank: 1

Description: Idol tucks the opponent's head under his arm and drapes their inside arm over his head. Hooking their inside leg from behind the knee, Idol lifts the opponent upwards as he falls backwards, causing the opponent to flip over him and fall on their back.

Cost: 50

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Technique Improvements:

Name: Roaring Elbow

Original: Rolling Elbow

Rank: 2

New Aspect: Strike Specialist

Description: By twisting his shoulders and hips more, Idol is able to increase the speed and power of his elbow attack. This method increases the cutting capability of the elbow attack, especially if Idol were to remove his elbow pad.

Cost: 75

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Technique Variations:

Name: Go To Sleep
Original: Idol Killer
Rank: 1
Description: Idol drapes an opponent over his shoulders in a fireman's carry position, then drops them in front of him and strikes their faces with his knee on their way down.
Cost: Free

Name: Torpedo Dropkick
Original: Missile Dropkick
Rank: 1
Description: Rather than get himself to an elevated position, Idol merely jumps before bringing his knees into his chest and delivering a front kick with the soles of both of his feet.
Cost: Free

Name: Heart Throb
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Original: Idol Assassin
Description: Idol delivers a high speed roundhouse kick to a standing opponents chest
Cost: Free

Name: Down Low Too Slow
Fighting Style: Professional Wrestling
Rank: 1
Original: Idol Assassin
Description: A high speed roundhouse kick to the back or side of an opponent's leg. This move is primarily used to bring taller opponents down to Idol's level.
Cost: Free

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Total Tally: 702 + 125 - (200 + (50 x 10) +  75)

Remaining X-Poinz: 52

[Jade]

Alright, so we've got a little bit of work to do here - just a couple of small things, really.

• FiSt Focuses... Foci?
  So, I know Adrian's old FiSts had this sort of... Sentence structure to their Focus section, but technically speaking, this is meant to be a "keyword" sort of deal, giving a brief overview of what the FiSt is all about. One or two words per focus, probably shouldn't have more than three - perhaps things like "Grapples", "Singular Strikes", and maybe "Showmanship" could work here? Those are just my own ideas; I'm sure you'll be able to figure out something more fitting, since it is your character and all. Not a major thing, but hey, we have a chance to fix it up now. Might as well take it!
• Aspect and New Trait
  Okay, so, this is less of an issue, more of a scenario where I want to make sure I understand what you're aiming for here. Would you mind breaking down what you're trying to do with these two? They sound like character-specific reflavorings of the "Powerful Strikes" Aspect and the "Inhuman Strength" Trait at their core, and that's cool if that is the case - I just want to make sure I'm reading them correctly. You don't necessarily have to change them, just explain what you're wanting to do.
• Techniques
  Alright, now we do have a fairly major issue - one of Adrian's techniques has disappeared. Unfortunately, I am going to need you to include that one in the new list, since it seems like everything else is present and accounted for, which will run you another 50 XPz.

Please get back to me at your earliest convenience! And also oh jeez I'm so sorry it took this long to get around to this.

[York]

• Focus has been tightened!
• Missing technique has been put back in and accounted for.
• The trait 'Powerful Strikes' sounds like a better fit for the trait I had in mind, so I will be using it's name instead of Strike Specialist

The reason I have contextualized them for Idol is because of Idol's theme of being more or less a normal man in the crazy One Piece world. He doesn't have super strength or super strong attacks.

His Strong Back Trait let's him suplex heavier opponents. It doesn't grant him Super human strength, merely a degree of strength higher than what he was previously capable of.

As for the Aspect, I specified that he adds certain motions to his attacks to make them more powerful. This is my way of explaining he's able to deliver stronger attacks despite not having superhuman strength.

I hope this clears things up

[Jade]

Alright! We talked over the details together, so you understand that the Aspect and Trait as they've been presented are a little weaker than the average ones. So, with that understanding, I don't see any other cause for concern here! Please update Adrian Idol's profile accordingly with these (rather large) changes at your earliest convenience.

[York]

Character’s Name:– Adrian Idol
Profile:– Profile

Current X-Poinz:– 944 (294 remaining)

New techniques

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Name:– Idol Driller
Fighting Style:– Professional wrestling
Rank:– 1
Description:– Idol places his opponents head between his legs and wraps his arms around their body. While leaning backwards, he lifts the opponent into an upside down position, before falling back and dropping them headfirst onto the ground
Cost:– 50

Name:– Gotch Suplex
Fighting Style:– Professional wrestling
Rank:– 1
Description:– From behind, Idol wraps both hands around the opponents waist. While bridging his legs and back, Idol lifts them up as he falls backwards to slam their back and shoulders into the ground.
Cost:– 50

Technique Improvements

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Name: Super Kick
Original: Idol Kick
Rank: 2
New Aspect: Powerful Strikes
Description: By adding a forward skip prior to the thrust kick, lowering his upper body, and  swinging his hips into it more, Idol is able to deliver a stronger, higher Idol Kick.

Cost:– 75

Variations

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Name:– Blondes away knee drop
Original:– Idol Killer
Rank:– 1
Description:– From an elevated position, Idol leaps and raises his knee before dropping it on one of their body parts.

Cost:– Free

Total Tally: 294 - 50 - 50 - 75

Remaining X-Poinz: 119

[Vio]

^{Alright, I’ll admit, I like the simplicity. I just have one slightly odd issue… Is it really a German Suplex when Germany doesn’t exist in the One Piece world? May need an alternative name.}

[York]

I had the exact same thought prior to posting this and spent almost an hour mulling that conundrum over.I'm going to change the name anyway, it is now called the Gotch Suplex.

[Vio]

^{In that case, consider these Approved! Make sure to update your profile!}