Making Waves - Unfinished [Submission]

[Vio]

Plot Title/Link: Making Waves
Total Number of Posts: 16
Plot Summary: On Cinna Island, the Marines have concocted a plan to lure in and capture pirates - new and old - from across the South Blue. The bait? A Devil Fruit of unknown type and potential. The guise? A no holds barred fighting tournament into which all are welcome and, while within the tournament's walls, exempt from typical laws. Seeking fun, Ringo of the newly forged Bancho Pirates enlists, while Gwynn Everett - seeking a worthy challenge in combat - also joins the fray without concern for the prize. Meanwhile, a certain pilot finds herself caught between a rock and a hard place when a peeping Tom ends up being knocked unconscious by her own doing...

Expanding on this plot summary is pretty much impossible, but I got what I could for it. Also, I wish only for the base experience (25) and not bonus experience. If, for whatever reason, the grader of this thread opts to award bonus Experience, I will take it as Poinz*.

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Character Name: Gwynn Everett
Number of Posts: 5
Experience: 100
Poinz %: Full*

[EriChar]

Well, well, well... What a travesty it would be if writing of this level went without a bonus score?

Gwynn Everett (Vio) - 5/5

Honestly, I'm not gonna harp on about how great your writing is, Vio. Everyone knows it, and it seems pointless to tell you over and over about your skill in solid RP and creativity. However, there are a few things I noted to be particularly nice about this effort, so I'll quickly jot them down;

• Alliteration - Always a joy to read someone who has been creative enough to alliteratively arrange their words, it adds a real sense of flair to the writing and honestly gives me a little smile with every instances!
• Synonyms - While this is sometimes a problem for writers here, it is such a distant thought for your writing that half the time you come up with such creative terms for things that I actually have to learn a new word! Magnifique!
• Companionship - While people might have their own mini characters and the like, I felt a real bond between our Black Knightess and her beautiful stallion, behaving more like best buds than rider and steed. I particularly liked it when, either through emulation or matching habits, they tended to take on the same behaviours! No boredom is better pontificated when the horse shares your yawn!

There, it actually looks like I've done my job now. So, totals time!!!

Gwynn Everette: 100 + 25(Base Exp) = 125!
**25 Poinz credited to Vio!**

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#allmygradeshaveviointhem

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