Odayakama Senshi (Techniques)

[Dandead10]

Character Name & Profile Link: Senshi Odayakama.
strawhatforum.proboards.com/post/94178/thread/23264
Devil Fruit Link: strawhatforum.proboards.com/post/95231/thread/23467 (if applicable to the character)
Class & Exp:E 0/150
Techniques Requested:
1.Lead Creation
2.Lead Absorbtion
Tech Upgrades Requested:N/A
Tech Deletions Requested: Sword Technique: Crescent Slice Beheading
Tech Variations Requested:N/A (show the original first)
Total Cost:1000

[Vio]

<sub>Hey, Dandead10! Just to let you know, the Lead Creation technique you're applying for here doesn't really count towards the limit (in my opinion), as it's pretty much the absolute fundamental of the Nama Nama no Mi. As for your Lead Absorption, that's pretty much described in the Devil Fruit's application as well, so you're good to go and add this to your updated profile!

As for Crescent Slice Beheading, this is now considered deleted. Please remove it from your updated profile!</sub>

[Dandead10]

Class and EXP: D 198/500
Techniques Requested #5-10
Link to Updated Profile: strawhatforum.proboards.com/post/96879/thread/23797

5. Surasshu-fū (Wind Slash)(D): A stone cutting basic wind slash technique. The swordsman using this technique draws their blade and prepares a downward slice to deliver a vertical crescent of wind capable of slicing through wood and stone. The key to the technique is to build up power, and release all of it in one fluid motion using momentum to make a crescent of compressed wind. It is a smaller size in the beginning that would be best used on large groups of targets, larger targets, slow targets, or in cramped areas. The beginning of the technique will create a crescent five feet tall. Using a wooden, stone, or softer weapon will normally be sliced in half and will deliver a deep slash across the enemy.

6. Lead Devastation (D): The user will be able to create a powdery form of lead as a cloud around the user that when inhaled will poison the target's within range that will not kill anyone outright. The range for the powder is a Ten meter diameter at D-rank, double at C-rank and so forth. Unlike regular lead poisoning which takes months or perhaps years, the poisoning of the Nama Nama No Mi is extremely rapid, but it's effects wear off within a time period leaving no long term effects. The effects depending on how much lead you have in your system, but are more commonly abdominal pain, headaches and anemia. The effects of this poison to pass can take anywhere from one day or one week. If large amounts of lead are ingested then it takes longer to recover and worse symptoms are gained. The user may cure your lead poisoning.
What Are the Symptoms of Lead Poisoning?
Symptoms of lead poisoning are varied. They may affect many parts of the body. Most of the time, lead poisoning builds up slowly. It follows repeated exposures to small quantities of lead.

Lead toxicity is rare after a single exposure or ingestion of lead.

Signs of repeated lead exposure include:

abdominal pain
abdominal cramps
aggressive behavior
constipation
sleep problems
headaches
irritability
loss of developmental skills in children
loss of appetite
fatigue
high blood pressure
numbness or tingling in the extremities
memory loss
anemia
kidney dysfunction

7. Lead Body(D): The user may trade mobility and speed in exchange for tough armor. The armor that is created may cover partially or entire body, but is very heavy at the beginning parts. If made lighter the armor loses density which gives less protection against attacks.

8. Nama Nama No:Wall(D): By placing both hands onto the ground, one may make a wall of a maximum size of twelve by twelve maximum or smaller wall at a fast speed. The strength of this wall is dependent on the rank and therefore the strength progression of lead. The wall may be made indefinately thick as long as it is within reason. Properties of this wall may be manipulated such as weight, density, and mass as long as it is within the field radius of the user's manipulation.

9. Sword Technique: Crimson Impale(D):
By focusing the muscular strength in the arms, one may use a blade to strongly thrust and stab creating a strong impact to break the defense of a weapon. It may be used as a fatal move as well to pierce an enemy through with said blade. The user will pause for a moment before rushing at a fast speed and executing the technique.

10: Sword Technique: Crimson Slash.(D): The user crouches putting force into their legs before shooting themselves off of any flat surface and dashing forwards at a fast speed to deliver a devastating strike across the opponent's body. (I.E: Imagine something like Zorro's Lion Strike or Onigiri.)

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Dandead10 said:

5. Surasshu-fū (Wind Slash)(D): A stone cutting basic wind slash technique. The swordsman using this technique draws their blade and prepares a downward slice to deliver a vertical crescent of wind capable of slicing through wood and stone. The key to the technique is to build up power, and release all of it in one fluid motion using momentum to make a crescent of compressed wind. It is a smaller size in the beginning that would be best used on large groups of targets, larger targets, slow targets, or in cramped areas. The beginning of the technique will create a crescent five feet tall. This technique when blocked with a normal weapon such as a plain katana will have it heavily chipped. Using a wooden, stone, or softer weapon will normally be sliced in half and will deliver a deep slash across the enemy.

Take the sentence I highlighted in red out. It's a degree of godmodding to determine what happens to a character's weapon that isn't controlled by you. Let the situation and your collaborators be the judge of that occurrence.

As for Lead Devastation, how exactly is the powder being distributed? Does the user expel it and it carries up to ten meters along the wind, or are you creating a cloud of powder that has a ten-meter diameter? Perhaps the measurement is actually radius as opposed to diameter? Telling us this stuff is integral if you ever hope for your RP partners to have a rough idea of how your ability is functioning - at a base level - without further explanation from you OOC-ly.

Dandead10 said:

10: Sword Technique: Red Cross(D): The user crouches putting force into their legs before shooting themselves off of any flat surface and dashing forwards at a fast speed to deliver a devastating slash. Going past the target, they will soon see that there were actually two slashes in the shape of an X on their body. The user could just as easily attack from behind at the moment, but a backwound is a swordsmen's greatest shame.

Yeeeaaahhh, you're gonna have to re-word the sentence I made bold and highlighted red. I know when stuff like this happens in shows, books, etc., it looks super cool; but regardless of the perspective the media decided to feed us, the 2 slashes in between the starting point of the technique and the end still occur normally. Your technique descriptions must reflect attempt and intention. Remember: don't speak of the end result as if it's set in stone, like you did with the, "next thing you know, 2 slashes show up," line.

Make those amends then post below!

[Dandead10]

I'm done with what you had asked of me. I believe I fixed what you wanted. I put that Lead Devastation is a cloud with a ten meter diameter. Got rid of that sentence in Surasshu-fū. I just decided to get rid of the idea of Red Cross completely and made it simpler.

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Everything is good now, mane! You may update your updated profile whenever you feel like it.

Transaction Approved!

[Dandead10]

Class and EXP: (C) 552/1500

Techniques Requested

1. I was told to balance my DF, I need to delete Lead Absorption. I am hoping I could do this for free seeing I was told I need to.
2. Variation to Technique #5 Surasshu-fū (Wind Slash)
11. Soru (Replace Technique 3)
12. Geppo (Release Technique 4)
12. Variation of Geppo (Geppo Kickoff)
3. Delete Technique 3
4. Delete Technique 4.
5. Technique #11 Black Volley
Link to Updated Profile: Link

1. Black Volley (C-Class):This allows the user to form lead balls the shape of bullets on their fingertips and then fire them immediately once formed. The user aims their fingers at their opponent and allows the user to barrage with near endless bullet fire. The user may manipulate the shapes of these bullets into other projectiles if they wish as the concept is the same. The speed of these formed projectiles are as if they have been fired from a firearm.

2. Nama Surasshu-fū (Lead Wind Slash): Now having experienced
enough experience with her devil fruit powers as well as the art of the blade, Senshi has learned how to incorporate her lead creation into her flying slashes. In order to perform this technique, the user first builds momentum within their arms as usual. However, she then coats the weapon that is being used in a coating of liquidized lead. When swinging at full force, the liquid lead is flung at high speeds while still in liquid form before hardening and turning into a crescent of sharp lead to deliver a more solid slash with mass which is propelled further by the force of wind. The size of this slash technique is roughly five feet tall and unlike normal flying slashes, this slash has the advantage of physically embedding itself into an opponent. 

3. Soru (Shave): The redheaded marine has taken usage of this technique to enhance her speed by kicking off the ground at rapid speed in order to propel herself fast distances. However, she still has not mastered it to perfection although it is getting there. One of the kinks that she has is that seeing she is right leg dominant, when propelling herself, she has not mastered balancing and tends to sway too far to the left. Hence, when she uses Soru she attempts to do it a bit farther to the right to reach her opponent accurately. The second kink she has with this technique is she is still not used to stopping herself from the fast speed and momentum. If she were to try and fling herself, she half the time still crashes into walls or obstacles in the way. She is training still to fix this. Her body is still getting accustomed to this technique as well as using it in excess still gets her drained.

4. Geppo (Moonwalk): Using this technique, this is the one particular technique out of the two Rokushiki she was trained in that she has mastered the basics of. This technique is similar conceptually to Soru but she kicks off the air at intense speed and power to propel herself into the air. She used to fling herself too far and therefore into walls and wasn't used to the speed. However, now she can control what direction she travels to and has balanced the technique perfectly to the point where she can control it as well as an average world powers practitioner.

5. Geppo Kickoff: A variation of using Geppo in a creative method. Senshi uses this variation of Geppo by propelling herself in a method in order to collide her feet into an enemy. Then, by using the effect of Geppo, she kicks off of an enemy ten times rapidly faster than an average eye can see to propel herself away from an enemy and at the same time to deliver fierce force to harm an enemy. 

Cost: 2000
2000 for deletions

[Vio]

<sup>Right then, Dandead10! This is going to be a bit of a job, but nothing we shouldn’t be able to manage! Before we do anything with the Devil Fruit (we’ll sort that out elsewhere) I’m going to give you the go ahead on the non-Devil Fruit related ones (Soru and co.), as well as the deletions of #3 and #4!

Find yourself 2,000 Beri down!

Stay tuned and we’ll start talking Devil Fruit elsewhere!</sup>