Sarah II (SUB)

[Mr. Moon]

Thread Details Template:–
Thread Title/Link:– Sarah II
Location/Mission Number:– West Blue (Toroa)
Total Post/Word Count:– 9012
Brief Synopsis:– To make sure his puppies will be safe even after he´ll leave Toroa for East Blue again, Gabriel confronted the current military leadership of Toroa and provoked Lord Protector into a duel, killing the swordsman with his own weapon. Impressed by his skills and the claim that he bested Seere in single combat, king of Toroa named Gabriel the new Lord Protector and entrusted M.A.R.I. with training the royal army. This didn´t go well with an emissary of the World Government who tried to manipulate Sophia Clovis, sister of the former lord protector into assassinating Gabriel. When this plan didn´t work, the ambassador tried to bribe the Professor himself, only to fail again.


Character Scoring Template:–
Character Name/Link:– Gabriel Moon
Individual Post Count:– 9012 (Log)
X-Poinz at Submission:– 8891
Notable Feats:–

- Provoked lord Clovis to a duel and defeated him

- Secured the position of Lord Protector

- Convinced lady Covis to join him

- Became engaged to Sarah

[Vio]

^{THE FINAL SCORES ARE IN!}

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^{Mr. Moon as Gabriel Moon!}

X-Poinz Gained: 170 X-Poinz

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_{Log Base Score = 0.02 × Word Count
Word Count = 8,897
Bonus Categories = N/A
Bonus Modifier = 0% (+0)
Multiplayer Modifier = 0%
Submission X-Poinz = 8,891}

New Total X-Poinz: 9,061

Note:– There’s a couple of short paragraphs at the start of the “Morning” chapter that are duplicated, so I knocked down the appropriate 115 words worth of content when calculating the scores.

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