Hidden Powers Unleashed [Submission]

[Vio]

Plot Title: Hidden Powers Unleashed!
Total Number of Posts: 26
Plot Summary:

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Arriving on Jreum Island in search of supplies, the unlikely duo of Pluto and Scarlette are preparing to head to the Grand Line, where greater challenges await them on their quest to become stronger. Splitting up to cover more ground in less time, the two venture into the city of the island, the former searching for honest supplies while the latter hunts for fresh prey. However, while Miss Grimm-Rosa continues her murderous ways out of sight of Rebecca, a familiar face presents itself to Pluto. 'Berserker', a former opponent, emerges from the shadows to challenge the young man once more, aided by an experienced tracker by the code name of 'Cerberus'.

Finding a new dress in the midst of her exploration, the rather happy Scarlette proceeds to 'liberate' a couple of men, including the likes of a Seaman Recruit on patrol. However, her growing killing spree soon comes to a halt when she reunites with Pluto. Forced into action, the two fight against their opponents in overwhelming battles, both of them forced to reveal hidden powers. Revealing his ability to transform to his formerly oblivious sister while Scarlette demonstrates an extraordinary aspect of her own Devil Fruit abilities, the two become locked in difficult battles that force them to push themselves to their limits...

BlacKitten
Character Name: Pluto
Number of Posts: 13
EXP: 1595 / 3000
Poinz Percentage: 0

Vio
Character Name: Scarlette Grimm-Rosa
Number of Posts: 13
EXP: 390 / 500
Poinz Percentage: 0

[Lord Bromosalino]

Well, might as well do this one too.

[Lord Bromosalino]

-------->Overall Thoughts

Not a half bad little thread at all! Now I just wish I read this thread before reading “Infiltrating the Marine Base” thread first. Though, I did get to read it in the context as a mini flashback, so that was nice. But onto the actual thread itself. It was quick, to the point, and done in a decisive manner. There was a goal, and it was nice to see both members both push for that without messing about to simply make the thread longer. I did have a few issues with the thread, but we’ll get into that individually. I must say, though, that I was a little disappointed. It feels as if you guys cut the thread short! The last post didn’t seem like a proper ending to a story, so I feel as if I read an incomplete thread. It feels as if Scarlette makes a declaration to get stronger and improver her abilities and then…well, then that’s it. It seemed incomplete and I would have instead liked to see either one of you (or both) take an extra post to put a true ‘ribbon’ onto the thread to end it. Just my thought though.

-------->Individual Ratings!

BlacKitten(Pluto) – 3.5/5

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Vio (Scarlette Grimm-Rosa) -- 4/5

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Totals and Endzone!

---->BlacKitten: (Pluto);
Details:

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EXP at Time of Submission: (1595/3000)
Base EXP Earned: (13) * (5 For doing a Story Mission) = (65)
Bonus EXP Earned: (13) * (3.5) = (46)
New EXP Total: (1595) + (65) + (46) = (1706/3000)

---->Vio: (Scarlette Grimm-Rosa);
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EXP at Time of Submission: (390/500)
Base EXP Earned: (13) * (5 For doing a Story Mission) = (65)
Bonus EXP Earned: (13) * (4) = (52)
New EXP Total: (390) + (65) + (52) = (507/1500)

Good job guys. Please update your profiles! z(<.<)b

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