Shining in Darkness [Submission]

[Blaka]

Plot Title/Link: Shining in Darkness
Marine Mission Rank/Number: -
Mission Number: -
Total Number of Posts: 21
Plot Summary: While the rest of the crew went out, Kusatta, Brandon and Hikaru stayed back on the ship. Kusatta tried to train his reading skills some more, when he was interrupted by his avian crewmate, who was carried away by a strong breeze. Hurrying after him, Kusatta passed a suspicious looking man, while Brandon had a battle with Curly the ram, which he won. Fleeing from the suspicious enemy, the two of them made it to a bathhouse. Brandon slipped by the door guard, which forced Kusatta to trade blows with said guard to get his friend back. Unfortunately, Nezumi Tori, who had been following them, used the opportunity of the resulting chaos to get a hold of Brandon and kidnap him. He used this to lure Kusatta away from the soon-to-be-arriving guards to claim the prize on his head for himself. Quickly, the two pirates found out that Tori was in the posession of a powerful devil fruit power called Rasu Rasu no Mi, which gave him the ability to take away their senses. Eventually, after a long and exhausting fight, Kusatta and Tori injured each other so heavily that Kusatta collapsed while Curly the ram and his herd carried Tori away.

Pirate Crew: Shining Pirates
Pirate Name/Link: Kusatta "Starving" Kotei
Current Bounty: 15.000.000
Number of Posts: 10
EXP: 352/500
What percentage of bonus exp do you want as Poinz?: 0

Pirate Crew: Shining Pirates
Pirate Name/Link: Brandon the Penguin
Current Bounty: 5
Number of Posts: 11
EXP: 184 / 500
What percentage of bonus exp do you want as Poinz?: 40-50%

[Lord Bromosalino]

Guess I have to do all the work around here D:<

[Lord Bromosalino]

-------->Overall Thoughts!

Alright, let’s get down to this shall we? Pretty good thread. Short, concise, and mixed in elements of humor and seriousness. While I did have a few issues (we will get into them individually), the thread as a whole was executed fairly well and, though short, was still a good read. I do always enjoy a thread that focuses on a select few members of a crew that sees them grow their relationship.

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-------->Individual Ratings!

blablakaka (Kusatta Kotei) – 3.5/5

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Vio(Brandon the Penguin) -- 4/5

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Totals and Endzone!

----> blablakaka : (New Total EXP for Kusatta Kotei);
Details:

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EXP at Time of Submission: (352/500)
Base EXP Earned: (10) * (5 For doing a Story Mission) = (50)
Bonus EXP Earned: (10) * (3.5) = (35)
New EXP Total: (352) + (500) + (35) = (437/500)

---->Vio: (New Total EXP for Brandon the Penguin);
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SPOILER: Click to show

EXP at Time of Submission: (184/500)
Base EXP Earned: (11) * (5 For doing a Story Mission) = (55)
Bonus EXP Earned: (11) * (4) = (44)
New EXP Total: (184) + (55) + (44) = (283/500)

Please update your profiles! (<.<) b

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