his adventure begins

[flare100]

flare wakes up and jumps out of his bed.he walks out of his small cabin.he goes on a stroll through town thinking about how he wants to be a pirate.he accidently walks into a men and falls down.flare gets up.
flare:wacth where ya standing big guy
the man grabs flare by the neck.
man:i dont think you know who your talking to so let me inform you my name is bill the gill with a bounty of 5.000.000 i can crush you like a stick pick.
flare puts both of his hands on bill's arm and burns it which makes him let go of his neck.
bill:HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
flare: whats wrong big guy
bill:GET HIM
flare attacked by 50 guys
flare: TIME TO ROCK
2 men tries to stackle him at once from left and right of flare
he jumps at last minute making the two men knock another out.he runs across 7 guys heads kicking them as he ran onto the next one knocking them all out.he encounters a big guy and as the guy tries to punch he jumps on his arm runs up it and kicks him in the face knocking him out.he runs by 20 burning them as he passed by them almost killing them.he is surrounds by 30 men and they all runs at him at once.he jumps into the air and smashes into the ground makeing a burning shockwave that nearly killed all the man
bill:y-ya-YOUR A MONSTER
bill runs away.a month later he sees a bouty poster with his picture on it for 10.000.000.he saw this as a chance of becomeing a pirate.a week later he set sail for the next island

[EriChar]

It isn't really my responsibility as a member to intervene, but you seem to have completely ignored the fact that you have to create and have approved a character before you can go into actual RP on this forum.

I would suggest that you start by looking at the rules section located here;
strawhatforum.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rules

Pay particular attention to the thread entitled General Forum Rules, this points out that you cannot start out your adventure until after your character (Including their profile, history and abilities) have been approved for use by the staff. If we allowed just anyone to throw RP up here, there would be pandemonium. Given that your thread apparently shows the character of 'Flare' doing some sort of spontaneous Indian burn to someone's arm, a staff member would need to confirm how viable this is to give to a character.

Once you have completed a thorough reading of the rules, the next stage that I would visit would be visiting the Character Information section;
strawhatforum.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=information

This is where you would post up your character, for a WIP (Work In Progress) character, it is advised that you put them in the drafts section rather than clogging other areas, this is located here

strawhatforum.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=drafts

To make a character, you should use the character template, which would be worth reading through since within the thread it contains information on how to correctly fill out the template, and hopefully reduce the chances of staff members finding errors with it during the approval process. As my hint of the day, I advise you leave the BB coding on the template (Eg, the fields like Character Name, which have a code around them).
Once you have finished the template, the next stage would be to post it up in the Profile Posting section, located here;

strawhatforum.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=profileposting

This section is where the staff review your character application, ask or revisions (if needed) and then move it on so that you can finally RP.

Until you have gotten to this stage, you are breaking the forum rules by posting RP in active sections. This could land you in trouble with the staff, and in the worst case scenario could result in warnings and bans. Since you're likely an honest One Piece fan who let their excitement get the better of them, I would prefer for these kind of things to not happen.

As 'one piece' of advice from me, I would suggest you revise the way that you RP. For one you don't seem to be using the correct spelling and grammar for what you're trying to write, and secondly you're role playing in a sort of script form. Here we prefer to use a third person narrative, and if you're unsure of what that is, I would suggest you try this wiki page on narrative styles;

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Third-person_narrative#Third-person_view

[Cirrus]

WELCOME to BV! We're a smart-casual, semi-literate One Piece role-playing site. The aforementioned semi-literate means that we're aimed at intermediate to advanced role-players.

That should have been your clue that just rocking up and doing whatever you felt like wasn't going to be in your best interests. Please, please follow Char's instructions - his providing of which I have nothing but the greatest gratitude for. Seeing as you're new you shan't receive a warning this time, but any more behaviour of this kind and you'll see a red bar appearing next to your name.

~Cirrus