Devil Fruit Revamping

[Sam]

Fox and Mr. Moon these changes have been approved by myself and Jade!

[Sam]

I’d like to update my fruit to a more proper standard!



[div align="center"][font size="3"][b]Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Fox[/b][/font][/div]
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[b]English Name:[/b] Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: Fox
[b]Classification:[/b] Zoan
[b]Owned By:[/b] [a href="https://strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25651/reynard-ayoki-update"] Reynard Ayoki[/a]

[hr][b][div align="center"]Appearance[/div][/b][hr]
[div align="justify"]The Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Fox resembles a blue apple with flame patterned devil fruit swirls. From its top a single big orange leaf that resembles a fox tail is unfurled. Once peeled, the fleshy inside is white and covered in small black seeds similar to the inner flesh of a pitaya. Like all devil fruits the flavor is disgusting! In the case of this fruit it's super bitter to the point of being indescribable to anyone that hasn't eaten anything similar. Not only is the flavor bad but also the smell... The fruit gives off the smell of a wet dog. This smell is amplified if it's left outside on a sunny day.
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[hr][div align="center"][b]Ability[/b][/div][hr]
[div align="justify"]This Devil Fruit turns its user into a(n) Fox Human ("Kitsune Ningen"), granting them the following transformations...[/div]

[ul type="square"][li][b]Full Beast Transformation[/b]
[div align="justify"]In full beast form, Reynard resembles a standard red fox standing on four relatively short limbs, in this transformation Reynard sprouts a long bushy tail that is longer than half his body length (in turns of body length he stands at one foot, eight inches, and with a length of two feet, eleven inches.) His body becomes covered in bright red-orange fur with brown ears tipped off with black fur. His legs also have dark brown socks that become black at the base. This fur is capable of protecting him in cold weather. While in this transformation Reynard's sight is increased seeing as foxes have exceptional eyesight that enables their hunting greatly. His sense of smell has increased but it's nothing to boast about when compared to other canids. His other great asset is his sense of hearing which is extremely acute and capable of catching faint sounds several meters away.[/div][/li]

[li][b]Half Beast Transformation[/b]
[div align="justify"] In a hybrid transformation, Reynard retains his humanoid shape and is able to stand upright with a pair of digitigrade legs. Red-orange fur covers his entire body much like it does in full beast form. Hybrid form is much larger than Reynard standing at least seven feet in height giving him extended reach and range that he would otherwise lack. Although while in this state he will sometimes hunch over or stand on all fours. Hybrid form gives Reynard access to a fox's agility as well as their retractable claws. [/div][/li][/ul]

[div align="justify"]This also grants them the following physical ability while transformed…[/div]
[ul type="square"][li][b]Alopex Athlete[/b]
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Red Foxes are very efficient when it comes to their weight being much lighter than other canids their size. This combined with rather explosively powerful legs enables them to perform impressive feats of speed and agility. In the wild red foxes have been recorded jumping over 7 foot fences with ease and outperforming other similar sized predators such as hyenas in terms of raw speed. Likewise the user of this fruit is gifted with a pair of powerful limbs.

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[hr][div align="center"][b]Weaknesses[/b][/div][hr]
[ul type="square"][li][div align="justify"][b]Kairoseki[/b] ("Sea-Prism Stone") debilitates the user by sapping their strength and prevents them from consciously controlling or activating their power.[/div][/li]

[li][div align="justify"][b]Submersion in water[/b] renders the Devil Fruit user immobile and causes them to sink, preventing conscious control of their abilities.[/div][/li][/ul]



[Jade]

Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Enenra

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• Although the inclusion of darkness in her smoke makes it far more dense than its natural counterpart, Lilin’s smoke is still able to be dispersed by powerful winds. This is especially useful against her otherwise intangible “Full-Beast” form, as it will either force her into a more stable form or require her to reform herself - a process which can take quite a while, depending on how thoroughly she is dispersed.


• Much like a Logia user, the smoke and darkness that makes up Lilin’s “Full-Beast” humanoid form is still functionally “her” - meaning that users of Busōshoku Haki will be able to hit her despite her otherwise intangibility.

[li]Although the inclusion of darkness in her smoke makes it far more dense than its natural counterpart, Lilin’s smoke is still able to be dispersed by powerful winds. This is especially useful against her otherwise intangible “Full-Beast” form, as it will either force her into a more stable form or require her to reform herself - a process which can take quite a while, depending on how thoroughly she is dispersed.[/li]
[li]Much like a Logia user, the smoke and darkness that makes up Lilin’s “Full-Beast” humanoid form is still functionally “her” - meaning that users of Busōshoku Haki will be able to hit her despite her otherwise intangibility.[/li]

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• The user’s darkness shares some strange similarities to the soot left behind by a fire, and can thus be very difficult to deal with. Direct and proper application of cleaning agents - chiefly, soap - can be utilized against this darkness in order to scrub it away... And can also be leveled against the user in order to bypass her otherworldly defenses.

[li]The user’s darkness shares some strange similarities to the soot left behind by a fire, and can thus be very difficult to deal with. Direct and proper application of cleaning agents - chiefly, [b]soap[/b] - can be utilized against this darkness in order to scrub it away... And can also be leveled against the user in order to bypass her otherworldly defenses.[/li]

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Devil Fruit: Rou Rou no Mi

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The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to manifest their powers externally, transforming their body into a massive prison structure, standing just about 8 stories tall.

The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to manifest their powers externally, transforming their body into a massive prison structure, standing just about 8 stories tall.

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The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to fully manifest their building form in physical space, transforming fully and obviously into an immense prison structure of steel and concrete that stands at just shy of 260 feet tall.

The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to fully manifest their building form in physical space, transforming fully and obviously into an immense prison structure of steel and concrete that stands at just shy of 260 feet tall.

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• While it possesses immense defensive capabilities, the Full-Size Manifestation ability of this Fruit also comes with the unfortunate drawback of being incredibly unwieldy. The size and weight of this form render Claire unable to perform techniques that call upon her agility, not unlike the Cumbersome negative Trait.

[list][li]While it possesses immense defensive capabilities, the [b]Full-Size Manifestation[/b] ability of this Fruit also comes with the unfortunate drawback of being incredibly unwieldy. The size and weight of this form render Claire unable to perform techniques that call upon her agility, not unlike the [b]Cumbersome[/b] negative Trait.[/li][/list]

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Devil Fruit: Niwa Niwa no Mi

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• While plant life can be grown on any surface through this ability, it is important to note that what happens after they are grown is dictated by the laws of reality, and the newly-grown plant will suffer the logical consequences of what they were grown upon. For instance, while a plant could be grown upon lava, it would burst into flames as soon as the power of the Niwa Niwa no Mi was no longer affecting it, and a plant grown upon a sheet of ice would simply wither away due to the lack of nutrients and bitter cold in the roots.


• There is one notable exception to this, however - in addition to having the usual weaknesses of a Devil Fruit, Bianca is utterly incapable of growing vegetation on Kairōseki, the substance that is sometimes known as seastone.


• The Niwa Photons that Bianca can produce are completely blocked and negated by anything that is not plant life - the rays cannot just touch a surface bears plants or seeds she intended to influence are growing upon, they must touch the plants or seeds themselves.

[li]While plant life can be [i]grown[/i] on any surface through this ability, it is important to note that what happens [i]after[/i] they are grown is dictated by the laws of reality, and the newly-grown plant will suffer the logical consequences of what they were grown upon. For instance, while a plant could be grown upon lava, it would burst into flames as soon as the power of the Niwa Niwa no Mi was no longer affecting it, and a plant grown upon a sheet of ice would simply wither away due to the lack of nutrients and bitter cold in the roots.[/li]
[ul type="square"][li]There is one notable exception to this, however - in addition to having the usual weaknesses of a Devil Fruit, Bianca is utterly incapable of growing vegetation on Kairōseki, the substance that is sometimes known as seastone.[/li][/ul]
[li]The Niwa Photons that Bianca can produce are completely blocked and negated by anything that is not plant life - the rays cannot just touch a surface bears plants or seeds she intended to influence are growing upon, they must touch the plants or seeds themselves.[/li]

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• In order to directly counter the use of the Niwa Niwa no Mi, one must seek ways of denying the user of space to transform into a garden. Treating surfaces with substances such as salt and vinegar is an effective way to deny Bianca places to grow her plants - spaces treated in this manner effectively become barren land, unable to support the growth of any sort of garden, at least until these impurities have been washed away.


• The Niwa Photons the user can emit must be emitted from their bare skin. As such, it is possible to block the user from making use of this method of growing her plants by simply covering her body or otherwise putting up barriers to make sure the Niwa Photons cannot hit the plants she would seek to manipulate.


• Contact with the substance known as kairōseki drains the user’s energy and prevents her from consciously controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.


• Submersion in any standing body of water renders the user immobile, causes her to sink like an anchor, and prevents her from controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.

[li]In order to directly counter the use of the Niwa Niwa no Mi, one must seek ways of denying the user of space to transform into a garden. Treating surfaces with substances such as [b]salt[/b] and [b]vinegar[/b] is an effective way to deny Bianca places to grow her plants - spaces treated in this manner effectively become barren land, unable to support the growth of any sort of garden, at least until these impurities have been washed away.[/li]
[li]The Niwa Photons the user can emit must be emitted from their bare skin. As such, it is possible to block the user from making use of this method of growing her plants by simply covering her body or otherwise putting up barriers to make sure the Niwa Photons cannot hit the plants she would seek to manipulate.[/li]
[li]Contact with the substance known as kairōseki drains the user’s energy and prevents her from consciously controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.[/li]
[li]Submersion in any standing body of water renders the user immobile, causes her to sink like an anchor, and prevents her from controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.[/li]

[Fox]

Feb 19, 2023 15:57:10 GMT -5 Sam said:

I’d like to update my fruit to a more proper standard!



[div align="center"][font size="3"][b]Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Fox[/b][/font][/div]
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[b]English Name:[/b] Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: Fox
[b]Classification:[/b] Zoan
[b]Owned By:[/b] [a href="https://strawhatforum.proboards.com/thread/25651/reynard-ayoki-update"] Reynard Ayoki[/a]

[hr][b][div align="center"]Appearance[/div][/b][hr]
[div align="justify"]The Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Fox resembles a blue apple with flame patterned devil fruit swirls. From its top a single big orange leaf that resembles a fox tail is unfurled. Once peeled, the fleshy inside is white and covered in small black seeds similar to the inner flesh of a pitaya. Like all devil fruits the flavor is disgusting! In the case of this fruit it's super bitter to the point of being indescribable to anyone that hasn't eaten anything similar. Not only is the flavor bad but also the smell... The fruit gives off the smell of a wet dog. This smell is amplified if it's left outside on a sunny day.
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[hr][div align="center"][b]Ability[/b][/div][hr]
[div align="justify"]This Devil Fruit turns its user into a(n) Fox Human ("Kitsune Ningen"), granting them the following transformations...[/div]

[ul type="square"][li][b]Full Beast Transformation[/b]
[div align="justify"]In full beast form, Reynard resembles a standard red fox standing on four relatively short limbs, in this transformation Reynard sprouts a long bushy tail that is longer than half his body length (in turns of body length he stands at one foot, eight inches, and with a length of two feet, eleven inches.) His body becomes covered in bright red-orange fur with brown ears tipped off with black fur. His legs also have dark brown socks that become black at the base. This fur is capable of protecting him in cold weather. While in this transformation Reynard's sight is increased seeing as foxes have exceptional eyesight that enables their hunting greatly. His sense of smell has increased but it's nothing to boast about when compared to other canids. His other great asset is his sense of hearing which is extremely acute and capable of catching faint sounds several meters away.[/div][/li]

[li][b]Half Beast Transformation[/b]
[div align="justify"] In a hybrid transformation, Reynard retains his humanoid shape and is able to stand upright with a pair of digitigrade legs. Red-orange fur covers his entire body much like it does in full beast form. Hybrid form is much larger than Reynard standing at least seven feet in height giving him extended reach and range that he would otherwise lack. Although while in this state he will sometimes hunch over or stand on all fours. Hybrid form gives Reynard access to a fox's agility as well as their retractable claws. [/div][/li][/ul]

[div align="justify"]This also grants them the following physical ability while transformed…[/div]
[ul type="square"][li][b]Alopex Athlete[/b]
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Red Foxes are very efficient when it comes to their weight being much lighter than other canids their size. This combined with rather explosively powerful legs enables them to perform impressive feats of speed and agility. In the wild red foxes have been recorded jumping over 7 foot fences with ease and outperforming other similar sized predators such as hyenas in terms of raw speed. Likewise the user of this fruit is gifted with a pair of powerful limbs.

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[hr][div align="center"][b]Weaknesses[/b][/div][hr]
[ul type="square"][li][div align="justify"][b]Kairoseki[/b] ("Sea-Prism Stone") debilitates the user by sapping their strength and prevents them from consciously controlling or activating their power.[/div][/li]

[li][div align="justify"][b]Submersion in water[/b] renders the Devil Fruit user immobile and causes them to sink, preventing conscious control of their abilities.[/div][/li][/ul]



This is Approved by myself and Vio!

[Fox]

Mar 11, 2023 3:11:08 GMT -5 Jade said:

Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Enenra

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• Although the inclusion of darkness in her smoke makes it far more dense than its natural counterpart, Lilin’s smoke is still able to be dispersed by powerful winds. This is especially useful against her otherwise intangible “Full-Beast” form, as it will either force her into a more stable form or require her to reform herself - a process which can take quite a while, depending on how thoroughly she is dispersed.


• Much like a Logia user, the smoke and darkness that makes up Lilin’s “Full-Beast” humanoid form is still functionally “her” - meaning that users of Busōshoku Haki will be able to hit her despite her otherwise intangibility.

[li]Although the inclusion of darkness in her smoke makes it far more dense than its natural counterpart, Lilin’s smoke is still able to be dispersed by powerful winds. This is especially useful against her otherwise intangible “Full-Beast” form, as it will either force her into a more stable form or require her to reform herself - a process which can take quite a while, depending on how thoroughly she is dispersed.[/li]
[li]Much like a Logia user, the smoke and darkness that makes up Lilin’s “Full-Beast” humanoid form is still functionally “her” - meaning that users of Busōshoku Haki will be able to hit her despite her otherwise intangibility.[/li]

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• The user’s darkness shares some strange similarities to the soot left behind by a fire, and can thus be very difficult to deal with. Direct and proper application of cleaning agents - chiefly, soap - can be utilized against this darkness in order to scrub it away... And can also be leveled against the user in order to bypass her otherworldly defenses.

[li]The user’s darkness shares some strange similarities to the soot left behind by a fire, and can thus be very difficult to deal with. Direct and proper application of cleaning agents - chiefly, [b]soap[/b] - can be utilized against this darkness in order to scrub it away... And can also be leveled against the user in order to bypass her otherworldly defenses.[/li]

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Devil Fruit: Rou Rou no Mi

Existing Text to be Replaced:

The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to manifest their powers externally, transforming their body into a massive prison structure, standing just about 8 stories tall.

The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to manifest their powers externally, transforming their body into a massive prison structure, standing just about 8 stories tall.

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The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to fully manifest their building form in physical space, transforming fully and obviously into an immense prison structure of steel and concrete that stands at just shy of 260 feet tall.

The user of the Rou Rou no Mi is able to fully manifest their building form in physical space, transforming fully and obviously into an immense prison structure of steel and concrete that stands at just shy of 260 feet tall.

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• While it possesses immense defensive capabilities, the Full-Size Manifestation ability of this Fruit also comes with the unfortunate drawback of being incredibly unwieldy. The size and weight of this form render Claire unable to perform techniques that call upon her agility, not unlike the Cumbersome negative Trait.

[list][li]While it possesses immense defensive capabilities, the [b]Full-Size Manifestation[/b] ability of this Fruit also comes with the unfortunate drawback of being incredibly unwieldy. The size and weight of this form render Claire unable to perform techniques that call upon her agility, not unlike the [b]Cumbersome[/b] negative Trait.[/li][/list]

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Devil Fruit: Niwa Niwa no Mi

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• While plant life can be grown on any surface through this ability, it is important to note that what happens after they are grown is dictated by the laws of reality, and the newly-grown plant will suffer the logical consequences of what they were grown upon. For instance, while a plant could be grown upon lava, it would burst into flames as soon as the power of the Niwa Niwa no Mi was no longer affecting it, and a plant grown upon a sheet of ice would simply wither away due to the lack of nutrients and bitter cold in the roots.


• There is one notable exception to this, however - in addition to having the usual weaknesses of a Devil Fruit, Bianca is utterly incapable of growing vegetation on Kairōseki, the substance that is sometimes known as seastone.


• The Niwa Photons that Bianca can produce are completely blocked and negated by anything that is not plant life - the rays cannot just touch a surface bears plants or seeds she intended to influence are growing upon, they must touch the plants or seeds themselves.

[li]While plant life can be [i]grown[/i] on any surface through this ability, it is important to note that what happens [i]after[/i] they are grown is dictated by the laws of reality, and the newly-grown plant will suffer the logical consequences of what they were grown upon. For instance, while a plant could be grown upon lava, it would burst into flames as soon as the power of the Niwa Niwa no Mi was no longer affecting it, and a plant grown upon a sheet of ice would simply wither away due to the lack of nutrients and bitter cold in the roots.[/li]
[ul type="square"][li]There is one notable exception to this, however - in addition to having the usual weaknesses of a Devil Fruit, Bianca is utterly incapable of growing vegetation on Kairōseki, the substance that is sometimes known as seastone.[/li][/ul]
[li]The Niwa Photons that Bianca can produce are completely blocked and negated by anything that is not plant life - the rays cannot just touch a surface bears plants or seeds she intended to influence are growing upon, they must touch the plants or seeds themselves.[/li]

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• In order to directly counter the use of the Niwa Niwa no Mi, one must seek ways of denying the user of space to transform into a garden. Treating surfaces with substances such as salt and vinegar is an effective way to deny Bianca places to grow her plants - spaces treated in this manner effectively become barren land, unable to support the growth of any sort of garden, at least until these impurities have been washed away.


• The Niwa Photons the user can emit must be emitted from their bare skin. As such, it is possible to block the user from making use of this method of growing her plants by simply covering her body or otherwise putting up barriers to make sure the Niwa Photons cannot hit the plants she would seek to manipulate.


• Contact with the substance known as kairōseki drains the user’s energy and prevents her from consciously controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.


• Submersion in any standing body of water renders the user immobile, causes her to sink like an anchor, and prevents her from controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.

[li]In order to directly counter the use of the Niwa Niwa no Mi, one must seek ways of denying the user of space to transform into a garden. Treating surfaces with substances such as [b]salt[/b] and [b]vinegar[/b] is an effective way to deny Bianca places to grow her plants - spaces treated in this manner effectively become barren land, unable to support the growth of any sort of garden, at least until these impurities have been washed away.[/li]
[li]The Niwa Photons the user can emit must be emitted from their bare skin. As such, it is possible to block the user from making use of this method of growing her plants by simply covering her body or otherwise putting up barriers to make sure the Niwa Photons cannot hit the plants she would seek to manipulate.[/li]
[li]Contact with the substance known as kairōseki drains the user’s energy and prevents her from consciously controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.[/li]
[li]Submersion in any standing body of water renders the user immobile, causes her to sink like an anchor, and prevents her from controlling or activating her Fruit-given abilities.[/li]

Approved by me and Vio.

[Bobbie]

Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cochineal
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Inherent Trait: Reactive Colourant:- Due to the natural properties of the Cochineal insect's biology, the user's body reacts to acidic and alkali properties in the air and within their own blood from the food that they consume when transformed. As a result, their skin will visibly shift in colour according to the pH level of their blood, the atmosphere they are in, and whatever they come into contact with, between shades of orange, red, pink, purple, and blue.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Katydid
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Inherent Trait: Enhanced Hearing:- Much like the Katydid, the transformed user gains very sensitive hearing that enables her to pick up on a human voice at a significant distance that would usually be out of earshot for the average person.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cicadella Viridis
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Inherent Trait: Enhanced Leg Strength:- When transformed, the user gains greater leg strength to facilitated magnificent leaps. These can be made across large distances and to incredible heights, or to launch himself across smaller gaps with a powerful kick off the ground.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cockroach
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Inherent Trait: Inhuman Malleability:- Like the cockroach, the user is able to squeeze through spaces that are only one third of their body's actual size when transformed.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Kissing Bug
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Inherent Trait: Compound Vision:- When transformed, the user gains the benefits of the compound eyes granted to them by this devil fruit. As a result, they have a wider field of view than the average person with perfect clarity of objects both far and near and a visual sensitivity to movement.

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{I'm not sure if I'd need to remove the coloured text so as to avoid having too many abilities granted to the user... if so, I'd like to simply remove the coloured text and perhaps fit it into his fighting style at a later stage.}

Hybrid form: When in hybrid form, the user’s body is modified to include features that resemble a kissing bug’s. A malleable rostrum replaces their tongue, which can be used for food consumption, or to attack by piercing its target, but can also function as an ordinary tongue as it folds within the user’s mouth. Out of the user’s neck, a pair of smooth, black forelegs protrude, which can fold to be concealed or extend up to half a metre. These can cling onto little items and help to hold food steady while eating. Matching in texture, the user’s shins taper off toward the ankles and the soles of their feet become fringed with tough spikey hairs to provide the ability to scale walls. The feet become narrower to be more like insect tarsi. The user's forearms also taper and gain a smooth black surface, as the user's palms narrow and gain the same mechanism for enhanced grip and the ability to scale walls due to many tiny hairs, while their fingers become black and stick-thin. The fingers can be left separated as individual fingers or pressed together to form a more tarsus-like appearance with the same hooked hairs to facilitate wall-climbing. The user gains compound eyes and, finally, a pair of membranous wings that can be folded flat on their back or outspread to allow for flight.

[Vio]

Hey, Bobbie!

Just quickly going through this, I can definitely approve the changes to the Katydid, Cicadella Viridis, and Cockroach Fruits! These will be adjusted accordingly.

The requested ability for the Cochineal doesn’t really work as an Inherent Trait, but you could still include this as something flavourful for the user’s ability. And in the case of the Kissing Bug, I feel I need to state that you don’t really need to remove the highlighted text, but that could just as well serve as an Inherent Trait or Inherent Quality to give it a firm identity in place of Compound Vision. The choice, really, is yours!

Here’s what I’m confirming:

Mar 18, 2023 13:13:58 GMT -5 Bobbie said:

Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Katydid
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[i]Inherent Trait: Enhanced Hearing[/i]:- Much like the Katydid, the transformed user gains very sensitive hearing that enables her to pick up on a human voice at a significant distance that would usually be out of earshot for the average person.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cicadella Viridis
Text to be added to Ability section
[i]Inherent Trait: Enhanced Leg Strength[/i]:- When transformed, the user gains greater leg strength to facilitated magnificent leaps. These can be made across large distances and to incredible heights, or to launch himself across smaller gaps with a powerful kick off the ground.

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Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cockroach
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[i]Inherent Trait: Inhuman Malleability[/i]:- Like the cockroach, the user is able to squeeze through spaces that are only one third of their body's actual size when transformed.

[Bobbie]

Alright, Vio , I've decided to leave the Kissing Bug DF as is then to have the inherent trait place more focus on the compound eyes to suit his personality and fighting style more.

Regarding the Cochineal DF, may I have the reactive colourant description added to the abilities section, just for flavour and include the following as an inherent trait?


Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cochineal
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Inherent Trait: Acidic Sweat:- The acidic properties in carminic acid, produced naturally by the cochineal, results in the user's sweat becoming highly acidic to the point that it can burn through reactive materials to the acid and thin membranes after a long period of contact.

[Vio]

Hey, Bobbie! This seems entirely okay, I’ll update them accordingly. Consider all below Approved!

Mar 18, 2023 13:13:58 GMT -5 Bobbie said:

Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cochineal
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[i]Reactive Colourant[/i]:- Due to the natural properties of the Cochineal insect's biology, the user's body reacts to acidic and alkali properties in the air and within their own blood from the food that they consume when transformed. As a result, their skin will visibly shift in colour according to the pH level of their blood, the atmosphere they are in, and whatever they come into contact with, between shades of orange, red, pink, purple, and blue.

Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Kissing Bug
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[i]Inherent Trait: Compound Vision[/i]:- When transformed, the user gains the benefits of the compound eyes granted to them by this devil fruit. As a result, they have a wider field of view than the average person with perfect clarity of objects both far and near and a visual sensitivity to movement.

Devil Fruit Link: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cochineal
Text to be added to Ability section
[i]Inherent Trait: Acidic Sweat:-[/i] The acidic properties in carminic acid, produced naturally by the cochineal, results in the user's sweat becoming highly acidic to the point that it can burn through reactive materials to the acid and thin membranes after a long period of contact.

[Fox]

Devil Fruit: Toka Toka no Mi, Model: Dragon

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Changing the sizes of the Transformations. Just wanted something a little bigger. I based this on the Hobbit movie's Smaug proportions.

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Full Beast Transformation
In their full beast transformation, the Devil Fruit user assumes the form of a massive dragon with iridescent red scales. This dragon is around 150’ (45.72m) long from head to tail. Large horns extend from the dragon’s head and a row of razor sharp spines trail down its neck, across its back and to the tip of its tail, where there’s a larger barb used as a rudder during flight. Two enormous wings extend from the user’s back, which enables them to fly. They have two arms and legs with incredibly sharp talons at the end of each. They typically walk on all fours, but their hands still retain their prehensile capabilities.
Half Beast Transformation
In their hybrid transformation, the Devil Fruit user gains some of the attributes of the full beast transformation. Their body is covered in a coat of iridescent red scales. They have wings and a long tail. They grow in size to about 100’ (30m) tall. Their arms and legs more closely resemble their full beast transformation, but they still retain their humanoid upright posture.

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• Full Beast Transformation
  
  In their full beast transformation, the Devil Fruit user assumes the form of a massive dragon with iridescent red scales. This dragon is around 640’ (195m) long from head to tail. Their wingspan is approximately 540' (165m), and they stand 90' (27.5m) tall. Large horns extend from the dragon’s head and a row of razor sharp spines trail down its neck, across its back and to the tip of its tail, where there’s a larger barb used as a rudder during flight. Two enormous wings extend from the user’s back, which enables them to fly. They have two arms and legs with incredibly sharp talons at the end of each. They typically walk on all fours, but their hands still retain their prehensile capabilities.
• Half Beast Transformation
  
  In their hybrid transformation, the Devil Fruit user gains some of the attributes of the full beast transformation. Their body is covered in a coat of iridescent red scales. They have wings and a long tail. They grow in size to about 90’ (27.5m) tall. Their arms and legs more closely resemble their full beast transformation, but they still retain their humanoid upright posture.

[Fox]

Tossing out old requests! This is the demarcation of the New System requests! Yay!