Bobbie's Battle Bobbins

[Bobbie]

Removed Gold Slash and modified Golden Lace, Vio .

[Vio]

^{Hey, Bobbie! Well, after much deliberation, we can finally call this one Approved! I must say, opposed magnetic properties are quite interesting? As much a help as they are a hindrance in the right scenario!}

[Bobbie]

Character: Tanako Momochi

Profile: link
Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cockroach
Current X-Poinz: 842 (692 Available)

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Added Traits

Everlasting Breath
D Class Additional Trait
Through practiced oxygen efficiency, Tanako is able to hold her breath for incredibly long durations that may appear almost everlasting, with no consequence to her energy levels.

Insatiable Hunger

Additional Negative Trait

The void within Tanako’s heart coupled with the incessant nature of a cockroach to eat has developed a bottomless pit in her stomach as any food she consumes is quickly disintegrated by the acids in her body. Cursed with a perpetual hunger that can only temporarily be assuaged for short periods of time, Tanako will devour anything from organic material, the acids in her stomach being perfectly capable of breaking down items inedible to humans.

Fighting Style Upgrade

Name:- Grave's Clutches
Focus:- Grappling
Class:- D

New Aspect (D Class):- Burrowing Fingertips
Description:- Tanako is able to curl her fingertips and apply enough pressure to burrow into solid surfaces, allowing her to hook onto different sorts of terrain, climb vertical surfaces, and offer a more damaging grip on an opponent.

Added Techniques

Name:- Drag Them Down
Fighting Style:- Grave's Clutches
Rank:- 2
Description:-Tanako approaches her opponent to grab ahold of them, primarily aiming for the facial region or exposed skin. Once her fingers are burrowed securely into their target, she swiftly contorts her body to either squeeze between the enemy’s legs and come out the other end, dragging them into a painful twist at ground level, or to climb over her enemy and force them into a back breaking twist down to ground level.
Aspect:- Burrowing Fingertips

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Costs

Earned: 
-200 (D Class FiSt Aspect)

Rebate:
+125 (D Class FiSt Aspect)
-125 (R2 Technique: Drag Them Down)

Earned remaining:- 492 XPz
Rebate remaining:- 00 XPz

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Character: Yoshimato Goyo
Profile: link
Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Kissing Bug
Current X-Poinz: 1,027  (927 Available)

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Added Traits

Inhuman Flexibility
D Class Additional Trait
Driven by his intense dislike for physical contact and flexibility training under M.A.R.I., Yoshi is able to wriggle his way out of tight spaces, including enemy's grapples and holds, provided that he is not in any form of chokehold. 

Fighting Style Upgrade

Name:- Tai Chi Tango
Focus:- Devil Fruit, Hand-to-Hand, Counterattacks (adding 'Throws')
Class:- D

New Aspect (D Class):- Fluid Evasion

Description:- Inspired by the training from M.A.R.I. in combination with his own knowledge of Tai Chi and his deep desire to avoid all forms of physical contact with another person, Yoshi has learnt to move his body in unnaturally flexible ways through muscular relaxation. In doing so, he is able to evade attacks that would otherwise seem impossible to dodge.

Advancement - Passive Quality:- Hardened Cuticle Fingers

Description:- Due to the nature of Yoshi’s Devil Fruit abilities, his thin fingers are incredibly tough and can pierce soft materials with little effort.

Added Techniques

Name:- Tai Chi Tag
Fighting Style:- Tai Chi Tango
Rank:- 1
Description:- Using his strong fingers to his advantage, Yoshi targets pressure points and other vital areas in his opponent for maximum shock or numbness, however temporary.

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Costs

Earned: 
-200 (D Class FiSt Aspect)
-150 (D Class FiSt Advancement)

Total: -350

Rebate:
+125 (D Class FiSt Aspect)
+50 (D Class FiSt Advancement)

Total: +175

-125 (R2 Technique: Tai Chi Takedwon)

Total: -125

Earned remaining:- 577 XPz
Rebate remaining:- 50 XPz

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Character: Sylas Kyra Higgins
Profile: link
Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no mi, Model: Cicadella Viridis
Current X-Poinz: 853 (753 Available)

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Added Traits

Superhuman Strength

D Class Additional Trait

Due to his large frame while in hybrid mode, Sylas has made sure to keep his body in good enough shape to keep up with the additional limbs. This has resulted in an increased muscle mass, lending his body the increased strength of a man who would usually be more visually muscular than him.

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Fighting Style

Name:- Mother's Wishes
Focus:- Hand-to-hand combat, Devil-fruit enhance martial arts

Class:- D

New Aspect (D class): Power Stomp
When bracing for impact of landing from a high jump, or during a powerful kick, Sylas has learnt to actively tense his muscles and focus on compressing the air between the soles of his feet and his target that is released upon contact. This allows him to break through or cause significant damage to highly durable targets such as stone and metal.

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Costs

Earned:
-200 (D Class FiSt Aspect)

Remaining earned:- 553

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Character: Danielle Sky
Profile: link
Devil Fruit: n/a
Current X-Poinz: 5,270 (1,920 available)

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Added Traits

Inhuman Toughness

A-Class Additional Trait
Due to reduced reaction to physical pain, Danielle is able to display a level of toughness that will see her beyond the limits of her own musculature. While this may temporarily grant her more strength, her body is not indestructible and will succumb to its injuries if this ability is abused, whether she feels the pain from it or not.

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Costs

n/a

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Character: Lukas Sei'Zan
Profile: link 
Devil Fruit: kado kado no mi
Current X-Poinz: 887 (312 available)

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Added Technique

Name:- Card Armour
Fighting Style:- Draw of the Dealer
Rank:- 1
Description:- By quickly producing cards from his skin, they rapidly wrap around the desired limb to create the effect of light armour to protect himself from light to medium attacks.

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Cost

Earned: 
-50 (R1 Technique: Card Armour)

Remaining earned: 262
Remaining rebate: 00

[Fox]

Alright, Bobbie! There’s a lot to go through here, so I’m going to try to take it in parts.

First, Tanako. Inhuman Resilience and Inhuman Regeneration both seem to be based off of the Roach Zoan’s physiology. Traits in general are representations of what your character can do as their race, untransformed, taking nothing else into account. These generally read like upgrades to the base capability of the fruit, which is something we plan on allowing in the new system, but is awkward to do in the current system. Roach Hooks, likewise, reads less like an Aspect and more like an application of Selective Transformation I. My recommendation is to wait on this for the new system. However, if you want to go forward with it, you’ll need to make changes in order to bring it in line with current system rulings.

Next, Yoshi! Slippery Bug reads as a flexibility Trait, but I just want to confirm with you that that is what it is. I’m okay with the Aspect being a sort of Kami-E Mastery sort of thing, but Tai Chi Takedown does not really seem to utilize it? I don’t see the application of the aspect in this technique. This changes the rank of the technique to 1 unless you incorporate it somehow. Let me know what you decide to do in that regard.

Sylas is completely fine. Consider that Approved.

Danielle’s Trait confuses me a pinch. It reads like Inhuman Toughness or Resilience but its name is Inhuman Strength. Could I just get some confirmation from you about what it is?

Lukas’s card trick is Approved.

Reply when you’ve made the other changes.

[Bobbie]

Okay, Fox , I've revised a couple of things, following your feedback!

Tanako:
1. I've removed the request to replace the Inhuman Flexibility trait and decided to leave it as it is, and included Everlasting Breath instead of Inhuman Regeneration. This would not depend on her zoan abilities whatsoever and can serve as a base trait instead...
2. Replaced Roach Hooks with Burrowing Fingertips, again, removing the link to her zoan abilities and tying it to her physical abilities with or without a Devil Fruit. 
3. The technique was tweaked to rely on Burrowing Fingertips instead.

Yoshi:
1. The trait was indeed intended to be a flexibility trait, I've relabeled it as such.
2. Downranked the technique - that was my mistake, I mistakenly referred to the passive trait instead of the aspect. Also tweaked the names.

Danielle: 
1. Rephrased to be more in line with Inhuman toughness, as I feel that is closer to what I was aiming for... it is intended to be pushing her body beyond its limits more freely, not expanding those limits.

Hope this works!  

[Fox]

Alright, Bobbie.

Danielle is Approved.

Yoshi is Approved.

Tanako's Everlasting Breath is borderline too strong for a non-legendary trait. I'll allow it, but just keep in mind that you do need to breathe at some point. Burrowing Fingertips is reminiscent of a strength aspect, so it passes. I'll call this Approved.