[SUB] Arrival at Kenzan! A Shogun's Heist!

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Thread Title/Link:– Arrival at Kenzan! A Shogun's Heist!
Location/Mission Number:– Kenzan Island, Bear Route, Grand Line
Total Post/Word Count:– 64
Brief Synopsis:–

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In the aftermath of the defeat at Nakamura Island and the decisions made at sea the remaining Shoguns arrive at the home of the Black Coven, Kenzan Island. After a bit of reconnaisance the plan is laid out. The Shoguns launch their search / attack upon the Black Coven bases in search of Syphalia. As they begin their invasion fights begin to break out across the bases and the illusion of secrecy dispels bit by bit. Jaq fights the Champion of the Kenzan Boxing Association, Tally fights the Black Coven Chief of Security, Del Ray fights the Vampire of the Black Coven, Gyato fights the Squire of the Coven. And bit by bit the Shoguns are spread out with still no sign of Syphalia. Battles are fought, people are beaten and revelations are made. Story to be continued in Part 2

Character Name/Link:– Jaq Bokier
Individual Post Count:– 29
X-Poinz at Submission:– 1764
Notable Feats:–
Defeated multiple handfuls of professional boxers, Defeated and possibly Defeated by the Champion of the Kenzan Boxing Association, Thaddeus Foor.

Character Name/Link:– Tally
Individual Post Count:– 32
X-Poinz at Submission:– 810
Notable Feats:–
Defeated the Chief of Security of the Black Coven, the DF user Delphine. Crashed herself through multiple walls for questonable reasons. Found Syphalia.

Character Name/Link:– Lilith Lilin
Individual Post Count:– 5
X-Poinz at Submission:– 3420
Notable Feats:–
Held chained and captured for the whole thread.

Character Name/Link:– Syphalia Minalion
Individual Post Count:– 4
X-Poinz at Submission:– 7100
Notable Feats:–
Held chained and captured for the whole thread.

Group Name/Link:– The Shoguns
Participating Members:– Syphalia, Lilin, Jaq
X-Poinz at Submission:– 3265

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I'll handle this one shortly. 

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Name and Link: Tally
User: ajwain
Total X-Poinz: 810 [Total] + 480 [32 Grand Line posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 1362 XPZ

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Name and Link: Lilith Lilin
User: ajwain
Total X-Poinz: 3420 [Total] + 75 [5 Grand Line posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 3506 XPZ

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Name and Link: Jaq Bokier
User: flame08
Total X-Poinz: 1764 [Total] + 435 [29 Grand Line posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 2264 XPZ

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Name and Link: Syphalia Minalion
User: flame08
Total X-Poinz: 7100 [Total] + 60 [4 Grand Line posts] x 1.15 [Social, Developmental and Proactivity bonuses included.] = 7169 XPZ

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Group name and Link: The Shoguns
Member(s): Syphalia Minalion, Lilith Lilin, Jaq Bokier
Total X-Poinz: 3265 [Total] + 328 [Syphalia, Lilin, Jaq] = 3593 XPZ

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{Click me for notes!}Notes: Thread literally had me reading up until the wee hours of the morning. Not because it was a chore, not because it was particularly long, but because of how well it was written. The two of you have exercised a continuation of an already enticing plot and managed to deliver on the hooks your dropped last time, although it was a bit slow at the beginning things quickly picked up and I found myself genuinely interested to see how each allegory would end. The fight scenes were wonderfully written and the bright cast of personality within the story made the tale that much more dramatic, eye catching. A particular favorite of mine was Delphine and Lawrence, for differing reasons. Ultimately I can say that through craftsmanship alone, the trials you put your characters through, that in itself warranted this rather generous grade as well as me gushing on and on about how good this read. Like. Seriously. Round of applause for you two. 

    I thoroughly enjoyed Epii and Mr.WrestlingSuperStar (yes this is what I've named him)-- but AJ already knew that from my messages on discord lmao. 

    Going to keep this brief, I have little to close on because wooo... lots of yarn to unravel here. Once again, great job and enjoy your loot. Looking forward to the next part of this thread when its up for grading haha. 

Enjoy your loot!