Angels Fall At Dusk [Submission]

[Blaka]

Plot Title/Link: Angels Fall At Dusk
Total Number of Posts: 40
Plot Summary:

• After a long time lost out at sea, Chete found her old crew's ship again, the crew abandoned by its leaders, and took over as Captain.
  
• Within a day, two strangers arrive at their ship. Discovering that they could prove useful allies, Chete decided to declared one of them her slave, Vox Machina. Due to the danger she poses, the other one, Cheska Stratonovski, was declared Chete's personal guest.
  
• Soon afterwards, the crew happened upon the ship Vox Machina came from. The Ludus, a former slaver vessel had been taken over by the subjects. The Dusk Pirates brutally end the revolt, kill most of the ship's inhabitants and re-enslave the rest.

Character Name/Link: Kulira Cheteria Akuvutika
Number of Posts: 13
Experience: 341/500
Poinz Reward %: 0
Feedback: No

Character Name/Link: Cheska Stratonovski
Number of Posts: 14
Experience: 150/500 (Her Profile says 100/500, but this was a mistake on me, Blab, upon approval - the package would be 150/500, as it states in the profile at the very top.)
Poinz Reward %: 0
Feedback: No. Only "Graders favourite moment".

Character Name/Link: Vox Machina
Number of Posts: 13
Experience: 150/500
Poinz Reward %: 25
Feedback: No

[Dandead10]

I shall be claiming your thread as part of my first thread of grading. I hope it is nice, juicy, and spicy. Allow me to begin.

[Dandead10]

-------->Individual Ratings!

Kulira Cheteria Akuvutika (Blaka ) -- 4.5/5


Cheska Stratonovski (Kami-Gaz ) -- 4/5

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The Awesome: My favorite part of this character was the fact that she has a third personality deep within her and that she is a bit of a ticking time bomb psychopath. One moment she's a shy introvert that can barely stand for herself and the next moment, she's a blood thirsty murderer.

 Vox Machina (viruswithshoes ) -- 4/5



Errors in Template:

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Totals and Endzone!

---->Blaka : 465/500
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{Spoiler}EXP at Time of Submission: 341/500
Base EXP Earned: 13x5=65
Bonus EXP Earned: 13x4.5=59
New EXP Total: 341+65+59=465/500

---->Kami-Gaz : 276/500
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{Spoiler}EXP at Time of Submission: 150
Base EXP Earned: 14x5=70
Bonus EXP Earned: 4x14=56
New EXP Total: 150+70+56=276/500

---->viruswithshoes : 254/500
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{Spoiler}EXP at Time of Submission: 150/500
Base EXP Earned: 5x13=65
Bonus EXP Earned: 4x13=52 25% converted into Poinz=39 EXP
New EXP Total: 150+65+39=254

Please update your profiles!

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NOTE: viruswithshoes asked for poinz, so Vox Machina instead goes to 254/500 exp and he earns 13 poinz.