Hōkō Hōkō no Mi

[oz]

Hōkō Hōkō no Mi

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English Name:– Vector Vector fruit
Classification:– Paramecia
Owned By:–Logan X long

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Appearance:– The Hōkō Hōkō no Mi looks like a large pear, with the colour being a deep purple. The Fruit is covered in swirls that instead of curving are jagged and rough, making the swirl more of a squarish shape that resembles a swirl. The stem of this Fruit is short and has no curl towards the end, and is the colour brown.

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Ability:–

Vector Arrows.
This devil fruit allows the user to summon physical arrows that look like the smooth black arrows that are on road signs that are pointing in a specific direction, the arrows when stepped or a object is placed on it, will send them flying in the specific direction it is pointing at, but the arrows are only summoned when the user does the vulcan salute hand gesture.

Weaknesses:–

Kairoseki: saps the physical strength of the Ability User and prevents them from consciously controlling or activating their power, it makes it so that logan can’t use his abilities.
Water: Submersion in water immobilizes the Ability User and causes them to sink, disabling conscious power control. Once submerged, logan is unable to use his devil fruit abilities.
Required Hand gesture: logan has to makes the Vulcan salute hand gesture, to then summon said arrows, but because of this if Logan’s hands where tied up or broken he would be unabated e to use his devil fruit abilities.

[Jade]

Hey there oz. We find ourselves in a very... Odd situation with this Fruit, in that I'm genuinely not sure how to approach its approval process. The Ability section has content, yes, but it's written in such a vague manner that I'm left confused about what you're actually attempting to do here. If we're going to get anything done here, I'm going to need you to take this back to the shop, hammer out a clearer description of what the vector arrows are, what they do, and how they are created, and then bring it back for a second pass at approval.

On the things I can speak on, though, I can tell you that your nebulous Limited Arrows weakness will not fly as a proper Weakness. Even if you were to put an actual number on it, that's a limitation, not a Weakness. You'll need to come up with something else here.

[oz]

I understand and will try and figure out how to make it better aj

[Jade]

Generally speaking, you should only post in an application again once you've made your changes so as to notify the staff that the Fruit is ready to be looked at again, since there are rules against double-posting. As there are also rules against deleting your posts and threads, however, I'm responding here to let you know this now.

[oz]

Ok got it i changed it as best i can and tried to make it so other could understand.