Kisho Kisho No Mi

[darkaon]

Kisho Kisho No Mi

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English Name: Weather Weather Fruit

Classification: Paramecia

Owned By: A new character of my creation.

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Appearance

This fruit is a blue colored one that looks like a big four sided banana. Motives of white circles decorate fruit alongside with some spirals at it's outer layer. Two sides of the fruit is relatively darker, yet it grants a very transparent view especially when hold towards the sky. An irregular motive of circle is noticeable at the tip of the fruit, which has a relatively lighter blue color.

Fruit tastes horrible, and it's bad taste comes from it's unbelievably dense flavour. It has no difference from a pasta with excessive amount of butter and oil inside of it - to an extend that you wouldn't even want to eat anything sweat all throughout your life.

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Ability

Kisho Kisho No Mi makes user a weather guy - by providing the ability to manipulate air pressure, temperature, winds, clouds and many more to an extend that immediate weather changes become possible. This is restricted in an area that the user can see, therefore it is a well known fact that previous users of the fruit often preferred positioning themselves on relatively high grounds to manipulate weather in a more broad area. Thunders, storms, draught, typhoons, raining and snowing are some of the weather events one may potentially create. Yet, in order to change weather, depending on what a kind of change user intended, some specific knowledge and experience is needed. Without recognising their own abilities and knowing some scientific details about how weather could be changed, a manipulation is almost always impossible. Therefore, user may not be as good as creating storms compared to causing draughts - depending on their knowledge, for example.

Weaknesses:

Kairōseki (“Sea-Prism Stone”) saps the physical strength of the Ability User and prevents them from consciously controlling or activating their power.

Submersion in water immobilises the Ability User and causes them to sink, disabling conscious power control.

Energy needed to cause changes in environment does not come from the environment itself. User uses the energy within, and therefore it might be impossible or even actually suicidal to try and make a big change in weather when user is not ready.

When the sight or concentration is lost while manipulating weather, manipulation stops and weather tries turning back to its natural form. This does not happen immediately, and as weather is no longer under user's control, nature decides what will happen instead of the user. Worse part is that while doing so, mother nature keeps on draining user's energy, and doesn't know when to stop. It should be understandable that when weather tries to turn back into it's natural form in the given situation, unexpected weather events can very possibly occur. It is, however, possible to gain control again after gaining sight or concentration back.

[Suriko]

Alright with the more cosmetic stuff out of the way. The real issues need to be addressed

First off, it'd be appreciated to have a bit more detail in the appearance. including more than just stating that it has spirals. and another thing we do like to help with that is a description of how it might have tasted when eaten, which all fruits taste terrible, but it'd be nice to see what it's particular flavor was.


As for the ability. this will need to be reworked a bit as most of it is indicative of what your intended character does with it. How this fruit apps need to be from the viewpoint of what does the fruit grant you as a power. How that is utilized is more taken care of by your character sheet and the fighting style and techniques section.

additionally, as far as the user can see is a pretty broad range, and then begs the question of what happens when they lose their ability of sight.

And then your one personal weakness does not really work as one, given that these random effects could be just as beneficial as they could be detrimental

[darkaon]

Edits made accordingly.

[Suriko]

So after a talk with the staff, which was the reason for the extended time this time reviewing this. It has been determined that control over air pressure and the power being based off sight is a bit too broad of power as it is appearing right now.

So to that end, We have a suggestion of use being able to generate a mini-weather effect in their hand, that they then can send up into the sky to produce the desired weather effect. Unfortunately, this would mean the more wind-based abilities would not be as finely controlled. but more a specific weather effect like a tornado or something else.